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for Illia of Sarsus

by SkyeCyan

schedule January 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is getting interesting! I wonder if the Romans will attack her family and take the women for slaves/ I look forward to the next update!
person J42
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice setup! Thanks for sharing the story.
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You write very well, though the pace is a little slow.

Of course, the setting is a sleepy little town - so perhaps that is perfectly appropriate.

You've set up Illia's character very well for whatever is to come.