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July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was DELICIOUS.
Eric was creepy. D:
Glad he's gone! Please continue writing <3
Eric was creepy. D:
Glad he's gone! Please continue writing <3
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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. There were a few mistakes with grammar and what not but over all I really really liked it! Please update soon I am anxious to see what will happen once they go into Davis' squad.
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written; amusing and entertaining. I really loved the setting being in a 'assassin's training camp. Lee is clearly gorgeous although there's something clearly smouldering within Brain. Keep writing!
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story. It's cute and sexy at the same time - and with a great protagonist (I love how she's tough but not rebel, confused but not slutty).
Also, I can not decide who's my favorite, Lee or Brian.
I love the 'lost puppy' Lee, who can just turn into this sexy greek good or the cute protective boyfriend. But, at the same time, who can not love the 'I silently love you' Brian, who can turn into the 'I'll fucking break that shithead's ribs' Brian.
I'm excited to see where you are going with the plot (I personally think you should make a happy threesome where everybody loves each other, but that may be a BIT off T_T).
Please, keep writing ♥
Also, I can not decide who's my favorite, Lee or Brian.
I love the 'lost puppy' Lee, who can just turn into this sexy greek good or the cute protective boyfriend. But, at the same time, who can not love the 'I silently love you' Brian, who can turn into the 'I'll fucking break that shithead's ribs' Brian.
I'm excited to see where you are going with the plot (I personally think you should make a happy threesome where everybody loves each other, but that may be a BIT off T_T).
Please, keep writing ♥