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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow great story!!!! please please update soon!!!
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, I just read the first chapter of your story, and I must say, I very much enjoyed it. And about the review, don't take it personally. I'm a writer, too, and some people are just big enough dumbasses to read into the /wrong/ things, things you didn't even write. It's part of the human error. The person was definitely an idiot, and should be taken from the gene pool, but...there are a lot of those people in the world, lol. You're good^^ Keep writing!
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that you have the right to be pissed at such a stupid and offensive comment by an idiot. That character and I share the same name and I am not in the least bit offended that she died. I was just surprised that it was spelled the same way!
I say keep writing. I rather liked the first chapter and definitely hope for a second. I would like to how the two will get along.
I say keep writing. I rather liked the first chapter and definitely hope for a second. I would like to how the two will get along.
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww...I really like this story, plz don't listen to truly stupid ppl, killing a less than minor character does not make you racist!! I can't believe someone would even take that much offense, anyway I hope you acctually do post more chapters cause this one was f*ckin yum ^-^
-sapphire2619
-sapphire2619
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well said! People who are so easily ruffled like that, usually live their lives segregated even if they may live in a fully multi-racial/cultural society. Don't let that make a dent on you.
*hugs*
*hugs*
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...MORE *zombie face*
That was awesome!
That was awesome!
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy..shit. That was HOT. I love the characters so much, you MUST write more for this story. It's simply not enough to only have one chapter! ;)
Also: I totally didn't even think 'racist' once when reading this story, that person is just overly sensitive and jumps to conclusions. I also feel like saying that she was a 'whore' is very ignorant and a little offending, because if ANYBODY is a whore here it's Jabez! XD
So yeah, please make more chapters! :)
Also: I totally didn't even think 'racist' once when reading this story, that person is just overly sensitive and jumps to conclusions. I also feel like saying that she was a 'whore' is very ignorant and a little offending, because if ANYBODY is a whore here it's Jabez! XD
So yeah, please make more chapters! :)
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey there
i'm just reviewing to say that i didn't find anything racist about your story and not to worry over the people who write bad reviews,
there's always someone who's going to disagree and write something that stings.
You never no what may have happened that day before they read your story, that made that part stand out for them.
Don't take it heart, it may be exactly what they want.
Hope there's another chappy soon.
S.
i'm just reviewing to say that i didn't find anything racist about your story and not to worry over the people who write bad reviews,
there's always someone who's going to disagree and write something that stings.
You never no what may have happened that day before they read your story, that made that part stand out for them.
Don't take it heart, it may be exactly what they want.
Hope there's another chappy soon.
S.
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*shivers* Mmmmm, VERY yummy ;P lol I seriously loved how you wrote this, it's totally my cup of tea! ^_^ Hehe I'd love to see more of these two hotties, AND can't wait for an update to your other story!!! *bounces* But I will, cuz I'm a good yaoi fangirl ^_^ lmao
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*lol* this was a great idea! I am completely in love with Dandruff, though, so I would rather see that finished before a sequel of this, but I would NOT mind it... ;o)