rate_review Reviews

Gods I'm hooked. I am so gald you desided to go on with this story.

Oh goodness I love this story with a passion! Please continue! I will make you brownies. The good kind.

Excellent starting chapters! I can't wait for an update.

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

Britney Spears, huh?
What's th ename of the song?

Well, I must say it is annoying that this story only has two chapters so far...
You're taking your sweet time while writting this.
But, this chapter has left me wondering what kind of heroic entrance Crucifix will make to save Jabez.
such silly chara names...

You need practice on sex scenes? What practice!? OMG, that was one of the hottest things I've read in an age. Seriously. I loved the characters' personalities as well, gritty and realistic. I just love this story. Your writing is amazing. Since we're allowed to beg... PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!!! PRETTY PLEASE!!! *Pathetic groveling...*

Please don't take this down. I'm a black female and while i thought it sucked that she died, I didn't have a problem with the way you portrayed her character. She wasn't a main character so it doesn't matter how she acted. The fact that she was black was actually refreshing. You only see white girls being slutty in stories on this website. I appreciate the fact that you have the ability to use other races. Because there's a slutty desperate girl in all races. lol. Anyway i hope you keep this up and ignore the wench that thinks that we should lie to ourselves and admit that people like that exist along with the good people of the african american race and the human race.

P.S. I love her name. Where did you come up with, it sounds like it came exactly from one of those old black explotation movies. lol.

I didn't see it as racist at all. That reviewer is one of those people that WANTS to see something racist in everything. They are probably very prejudiced themselves, too. They want to find a reason to hate. In fact, they are racists themselves. You are what you hate, right?

Anyways, I commend you on how intelligently you corrected that low brow reviewer. I liked your story. I mean, regardless of what color she was, she was going to die. I will say though that in a way, your story feels more than just a one shot. I would be curious to see how it transpires.

I want to add my voice to everyone else who begged for more.It's so good we need to read more of this !! Should I dare to say I'm black and that I loved Chanel...*wink* Aida

Oooh, so glad to hear there'll be more of this! :D
The two characters appealed to me at once and I really think there's more in them than a one shot. That being said, I LOVE said one shot, it was hot and oh so interesting, it's begging for more all on its own. XD

Also: what a weird review. oOx
Whatever, you can't please everyone; I once had a reviewer complain about a condom, said it ruined the story for him.
WTF, hm? XD

~jea