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I think this would need at least some sort of Epilogue to show how their relationship established some sort of status quo, it seems really unfinished like this, frankly, as if you just lost interest. And hey, I'm not complaining (exactly), 9/10 stories I start I never finish, so whatever. ^^;; Thx for letting us know. =)

wow, that was an abrupt ending. i'm real sad you're not gonna continue! i was so into it! i'm sure there's plenty to add...nicholas's revenge for example...but hey, it was still a pleasure (in more ways than one lol) to read your fic!! <3 i really enjoyed it!

I like the new characters. Rebecca seems a little too well behaved to be Crucifix's type. We shall find out soon I guess. I like the contrast between Crucifix and his house.

Even though you don't update often, each new chapter is like ice-cream to me!! I loved this one! It shows how possessive Crucifix is of Jabes, it's so sexy! The whole time, I was entranced. Thanks so much for sharing, and I can't wait for your next chapter! 8D

Not boring at all! This was a great chapter, and the sex was incredibly hot (though I found the gang bang of chapter 3 to be incredibly hot too cause I'm bad like that) I love the setting you've put this story to, modern yet old fashioned and with a clear line separating the two (the city defines this rather well)

Also, he barely was in at the end, but I already love Bennett. I can just tell he's gonna piss Jabez off plenty, which will be fun, granted Jabez isn't hungry.

Anyways, I shall wait patiently for Chapter 5 and hold a gun to your muse's head. Keep up your marvelous work!

I love that Crucifix is such an asshole. Please don't change him. XD

So good to see that you wrote more and it was great as always!

Hot nasty and cute...great story love your characters, especially the Beautiful and mysterious Jaby the vampire whore...what a piece of work. I am impatient to learn about his past. Powerful Yaoi the best kind!
Your sex scenes are terrific I don't see a thing wrong with them... don't keep saying that! Don't fix what is already good...truly!

Look forward to much more story, G

OMG, that scene where Crucifix shows up and Jabez PUNCHES him...LOL

I adored this. I really loved the hardcore, fetish scene too. You do that WELL, my dear.

I'm so glad you reviewed my story so I could find this! JOY!

Oh oh yes, I do adore the gun play.

That was excruciatingly hot.