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October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think that your plot, and writing is pretty good, I just think that you don't know how to properly end a story. Besides that it isn't bad, but you left a lot of unanswered questions.
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November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for ruining your own story with an offensive stereotype. Chanel Laquisha Dionne Jackson, wow seriously?
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you are pure evil I just got into the story and you ended it...wow
Great story though
Great story though
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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that is very mean to end it there, i do hope there is more
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I agree with everyone else before me about the "ending." It was indeed WAY too incomplete that not even an epilogue will be enough.
On a scale of 1-10
Plot - 9
Smut - 23!
Ending - 2
Sorry, but I think this fic has potential and in need of elaboration, so yeah, the "ending" kinda disappointed me too. :(
On a scale of 1-10
Plot - 9
Smut - 23!
Ending - 2
Sorry, but I think this fic has potential and in need of elaboration, so yeah, the "ending" kinda disappointed me too. :(
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well then continue listening to britney spears because you have produced one hell of a story with thatXD
whahahah that part whre he punched Cruc (shortened his name) was fcking funnyDX hahahahah me likes<3
anyways please make a sequel I mean! I want to know what will happen to Nicholas and what he will do! there are many reasons for making a sequel.
You are seriously amazing...I mean...I love your writing style...I love your sadist side...because I'm one tooxD anyways please continue writing wonderful stories like this one
whahahah that part whre he punched Cruc (shortened his name) was fcking funnyDX hahahahah me likes<3
anyways please make a sequel I mean! I want to know what will happen to Nicholas and what he will do! there are many reasons for making a sequel.
You are seriously amazing...I mean...I love your writing style...I love your sadist side...because I'm one tooxD anyways please continue writing wonderful stories like this one
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooo, seriously; you just introduced new characters, a new, interesting side to the protagonist, an ongoing struggle with the enemy, and a dark past - how could you end it here? Do you have no heart? Your note made me die a little inside - this doesn't feel like an ending at all.
btw, loved it. Very hot, and lots of fun. I'm quite the fan of your other work, as well, and I desperately hope to see more of these two because I love them so very much.
btw, loved it. Very hot, and lots of fun. I'm quite the fan of your other work, as well, and I desperately hope to see more of these two because I love them so very much.
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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!? END IT THERE??? Whyyyy :( It could have uh gone somewhere... or something. Anyways I'm sad. YOU BETTER DO A SEQUEL! Or something. Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You kept dropping some hints into both Jabez and Crucifix's backgrounds throughout the story so I was hoping you would go into that as the story developed. Right now, I feel Jabez is basically in the same place as he was beforehand but just with a change of owner. Crucifix still hasn't developed "real" feelings for Jabez and Nicolas is supposedly still seeking revenge.
The story is great, but I agree that the ending is abrupt. I hope you'll write a sequel.
The story is great, but I agree that the ending is abrupt. I hope you'll write a sequel.
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading Silver Revolver. The characters are great. I really like the back and forth between Crucifix and Jabez. I imagine things were just about to get nasty with Nicholas seeking revenge. Thanks for writing it. Whenever you do a sequel, I will be eager to read it.