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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent beginning, I hope that you update and move onto another chapter soon. I want to know more of what's going on just like Alea does.
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a great begining iI like that the girl hs spirint and she isn't a meek inocent onewe have alot of that usually, I like this a lot you have my support
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Context-wise, it was very well executed. Well done.
Content-wise, your writing is very well-detailed. It's a first chapter, and I'm left with not much else to say.
Keep up the great work! See you next chapter!
Content-wise, your writing is very well-detailed. It's a first chapter, and I'm left with not much else to say.
Keep up the great work! See you next chapter!
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm hooked already!
I love your descriptions of your characters and the obvious in depth plot you're working on...^^
Please update soon!
I love your descriptions of your characters and the obvious in depth plot you're working on...^^
Please update soon!