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I liked the speech. I thought it had the right tone, evil manipulation. LOL! I have to say the second prince is amusing in his ignorant trust of his co conspirators. Every time he says or does something he thinks is oh so clever I chuckle too myself waiting for the day they double cross him and his world comes tumbling down. I am not sure if this was intentional but I picked up a note of urgency in the progression of events in ch 2. I felt like I was anticipating something or you know the feeling you get when characters are trying to plot something in secret. I wonder what is up with Middy and Iranny.

Hello! Long time no see! Well, you know, it's really a LooooooooooooooooooNG TIME. But, fear not, I'll always there with you. Keep it up. You make me think that you already forget this story. It's really good that you aren't. I'm waiting for the next story of Edyane and our little brat (YOU-KNOW-WHO). Finally, maybe we can see some romance OR SMUT *laughing* I can't imagine Edyane and Iadden kissing. I think Iadden will kick Edyane for that. I'm looking forward for Edyane's change. I wonder what will happen when they meet each other after ten years.
PS. DON'T WORRY. BE HAPPY. I'll always support you. DO NOT GIVE UP >_<

Hello there;]
I'm one of those lurker readers that went through the first part of your story without leaving a review. I did rate all the chapters, so I hope that counts for something.XD

I love your story. The plot has the quality of a publish fantasy novel with the added kinks of mpreg and slash. It is addictive and fulfilling to my reading demands and I'm so glad you're back with the second part. (btw how many parts have you planned?)

And just a few notes from a fangirl: I've been a Edyane/Iadden shipper almost from the beginning, I don't know where you're going with the story but Edyane/Meanea never quite felt right to me (Fenaleos is just too sweet and good to be betrayed like that)and I'm sure you were leaving subtle (and not so subtle) hints of it all along. Lnorien and Midaen’niel have also intrigued and Ryaen’ne andDelaen’niel, so tragic and so, so right!

Enough fangirling, anyway.

I will be waiting your next chapters eagerly and promise to leave reviews from now on.*hugs*

I just readed The color of Divinity I and I´m glad that you are writing part II.

OMG OMG OMG YOU UPDATED (GLOMPS)
sorry sorry I am just so excited I love this storry. I think you should try and get it published
and made into a movie or somethign is so awsome

thanx sooo much again. the second part seems even more exciting than the first
and I can't wait to read about how my lovlie little black haired darling hag grown up in 10 years.

thanx again and please try and update soon

<3

I am so sorry its been hard recently. I totally understand how life gets in the way. Don't feel bad about updating after all it's suppose to be fun not another chore and we don't pay you so you don't owe us anything. I liked this ch the way it tied the past to the present. It was a great way to start after such a long hiatus. I am sorry to have missed the death scene however I am glad I didn't have to cry through it. I am excited that Ia has been revealed as the Black haired Ethen. I can't wait to see how it plays out with the return of the troops. Awesome first ch!

i'm just glad you're still writting this.
some stories i read never get their ending.
i like Ari a lot.
a lot.
if i remember the name correctly.