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HI!!! Well, no important action this time and here I am imagining things between Yari'niel and Midan'niel like......some smut or lemon???? Sorry T.T Forget it. Just a suggestion though. Look forward to see some action between Iararin'ne and Yari'niel. Hey, I want to ask....Don't you think Yari'niel was acting a bit (maybe a lot) like a casanova (playboy or a flirt????). I personally think that he was a flirt especially from the way he act. Finally, you know I actually love Nlie'seri. He was cute in every_bad_way. I wonder if he actually love his brother deep (very deep) in his heart. The story would be different without him. See you in the next chapter okay. Bye Bye

It was worth waiting a little longer if the result was getting Yari’niel saved.;P Glad I helped save him.♥ I like him and I like what might happen between him and Midi, but as I said before I still want to meet Lnorien and see him interact with his promised before I make up my mind about who I want sweet Midaen'niel have a future with. And as much as I'm enjoying these early chapters, I can't wait for Edyane and Iadden and Meanea to show up.

As for this chapter, nicely done and isn't Nlie’sieri a peach? He does make a good villain, thoughXD A bit self-centred but who's complaining? Thank Maguenta, he sent Yari’niel to spy on Iararin’ne.

Hope to see more soon.*hugs*

Hey, long time no see. I miss you. Your story is still as good as ever but I hope that we will be able to see Edyane and Iadden soon. Anyway, I have a request. Can you make a love scene between Delaen'niel and Ryaen'ne? I really want to know whether Delaen'niel was the seme or the uke (Sorry, Forgive me if it was unpolite). You know I think the reason Lian'niel hate Delaen'niel was because he knew that the prince didn't love his brother (Iararin'ne) or...maybe feeling jealous (Upon who....I don't know). I love Yarin'niel (is that right, Your character in TCD always have such a hard to remember name). Hope to see some romance or drama for our dreamseer. I love to see Lnorien to have a rival that is if he love his fiancee whatsoever. Well, gotta go or my mom gonna be angry. Fast...Fast. Somehow she forbid me to access internet. Hiks T.T I think it's because I spend to much time playing in the net. Sorry for bad grammar and wrong spell. Buh Bye.

Still living to my expectations so far;]
I like Yari’niel, he was definitely a god send to Midaen’niel. So don't just kill him.
I can even anticipate some juicy happenings on their journeyXD And even if you don't go there, I might write you some fanfiction. I still wanna see Midaen’niel and Lnorien at least meet but I can fangirl in the mean time;P

I've been browsing you site and remembering all of the characters that still haven't show up in this second part, there's loads, I mean all of the main characters haven't yet made an appearance. This story is huge and don't worry I'm sure you'll manage ALL the characters, even the new and unexpected.

Keep up the wonderful work. Till the next chapter.

No don't kill him. I barely know him but I love the conflicted character vibe I get from him. This whole chap was great. It got my blood pumping in anticipation of the showdown. You did a really good job in creating the mood.

Aww, I feel flattered that you took my suggestion and actually started a whole site. Good goin'! The site looks really good and don't worry I'm sure you'll fill it up with tons of info about this world you've created in no time.

About the actual chapter: Way to go Midaen’niel and Iararin’ne! I like it when the less expected characters take things into their hands and do something about the 'faith of the world'! Somehow I kinda expected Midaen’niel to have an active role in things, seeing that he showed a promising breaking-rules vein since he was young, ^_~ Iararin’ne joining in was a nice surprise, specially since he kinda passed by the 1st book unnoticed.

Aching to read more of this, but feel no pressure, good things take time to come to life!

I have been following your story for a while now and I really enjoy where the story is going. Even if this chapter was hard to write it came out well. I'm looking foward to the next chapter.

OH, our poor villain! Nlie'sieri *hope I spell it right*. Parading around with a speech like that one. Wonder why Iadden isn't there? He definitely wouldn't allow it. I try to imagine his face when the truth comes out *Laughing hard* It's hard not to hate that one but I guess he isn't the real enemy yet. I wonder what Maguenta have in store for Edyane. Anyway, hope to see you and the next story soon. Don't worry about your computer breakdown. I'm glad that everything is fine. God Bless

Interesting chapter; I've been reading "A Song of Fire and Ice" by George RR Martin so I'm all up for Court conspiracies and High treason and isn't Nlie’sieri a good brother? Pretensions to the throne? Nah, he's just looking after it in his brother's absence.
By the way, was he the Eth that was conspiring with the Black Wizards in the early chapters of the The color of Divinity I? It was a while ago, I can't recall it well.^_^'

Also, if you're going with the readers preferences for the end pairings, I'm shipping Edyane/Iadden all the way.XD

P.S.:I think you need to do an encyclopedia of names, places, social behavior and other details of this world of yours, there's too many details to absorb and notice.

aww thanx for the awsome chapter i would be sad if u don't publish this. Its perfect I love ur story so much.
I reallly hope the next chapter comes out faster. I am very excited now. <3 thanx a lot again