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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, long time no see. Another good chapter. Midi meet Lnorien but I guess he didn't even know that it is him. What a pity! T.T. Edyane would never imagine that Iadden is the dark-haired ethen but Iadden know about Edyane as Maguenta i the legend (am I right? It's been a while maybe I should try to read eveything once more from the beginning). Hope to see more of your stories SO DO NOT BE DISCOURAGE. The only thing that matterede is the fact you are the author of this story and not someone who wrote stupid thing about you. >_<
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, long time no see. Another good chapter. Midi meet Lnorien but I guess he didn't even know that it is him. What a pity! T.T. Edyane would never imagine that Iadden is the dark-haired ethen but Iadden know about Edyane as Maguenta i the legend (am I right? It's been a while maybe I should try to read eveything once more from the beginning). Hope to see more of your stories SO DO NOT BE DISCOURAGE. The only thing that matterede is the fact you are the author of this story and not someone who wrote stupid thing about you. >_<
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read both stories in one go and am on the edge of my seat looking forward to an update!
I hope Yari’niel finds love, even if its not with Midaen’niel. Wasn't a fan of Lnorien because of his treatment to Midaen’niel though he is growing on me now.
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
I hope Yari’niel finds love, even if its not with Midaen’niel. Wasn't a fan of Lnorien because of his treatment to Midaen’niel though he is growing on me now.
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hiya
First of all this chapter was really good so don't put yourself down about it! We finally got to meet the great lord general himself and I can see why you like his character so much! Poor Midaen’niel getting confused by his feelings. I wonder who his mystery saviour is! I have a hunch but I don't want to say anything in case I'm wrong! I also loved the whole Edyane visiting Iadden in his dreams and not knowing it's him! Just also wanted to say I hope your exams went well and that you've managed to recover. Don't pay attention to mean people who say you are letting them down! Sometimes there are more important things we need to put our focus on! Wish you luck with any other exams you may have! Keep up the great work!
First of all this chapter was really good so don't put yourself down about it! We finally got to meet the great lord general himself and I can see why you like his character so much! Poor Midaen’niel getting confused by his feelings. I wonder who his mystery saviour is! I have a hunch but I don't want to say anything in case I'm wrong! I also loved the whole Edyane visiting Iadden in his dreams and not knowing it's him! Just also wanted to say I hope your exams went well and that you've managed to recover. Don't pay attention to mean people who say you are letting them down! Sometimes there are more important things we need to put our focus on! Wish you luck with any other exams you may have! Keep up the great work!
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello, wah I can't remember which character I've mistook for Ari.
Sure, I'll be glad if you use the name.
I'm enjoying your new chapters, and am curious how will the story go from now on.
I can't wait for Iaden to grow up and get his ethen;;;;)))
Yeah I'm a perv.
And of course can't wait for the mysterious stranger to hook up with Med.
I can't seem to stop giving your characters nick names*laughs*
Anyway, stay strong and write more!
L.fire a.k.a lividfire
Sure, I'll be glad if you use the name.
I'm enjoying your new chapters, and am curious how will the story go from now on.
I can't wait for Iaden to grow up and get his ethen;;;;)))
Yeah I'm a perv.
And of course can't wait for the mysterious stranger to hook up with Med.
I can't seem to stop giving your characters nick names*laughs*
Anyway, stay strong and write more!
L.fire a.k.a lividfire
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a huge chapter, I'm so happy! And really, it isn't bad at all!
So review: Lnorien FINALLY!!! And I like him, I wasn't sure I was going to like him but I definitely do and now I think I'm as confused as you as with whom do I want Midi to end up with.XD I also like the interaction between Midi and Yari, although I thought Yari was a bit too forward, jumping Midi like that and all.=P Okay, forget the last paragraph.^^'' I just realised I want Midi and Lnorien to end up together, I wont mind the misunderstandings and all but that gut reaction of Midi at the end, that's LOVE♥!^_______^
Love the garden and Edyane's dream and can't wait for the next chapters to see them interact and bicker with each other, or not...
As always, eagerly awaiting for more of your wonderful work. See ya:]
So review: Lnorien FINALLY!!! And I like him, I wasn't sure I was going to like him but I definitely do and now I think I'm as confused as you as with whom do I want Midi to end up with.XD I also like the interaction between Midi and Yari, although I thought Yari was a bit too forward, jumping Midi like that and all.=P Okay, forget the last paragraph.^^'' I just realised I want Midi and Lnorien to end up together, I wont mind the misunderstandings and all but that gut reaction of Midi at the end, that's LOVE♥!^_______^
Love the garden and Edyane's dream and can't wait for the next chapters to see them interact and bicker with each other, or not...
As always, eagerly awaiting for more of your wonderful work. See ya:]
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thankyou for the update It makes me happy. you have a very unique story and i love ur characters. I can't wait unitl our prince and black haired Ethen are back together
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! I really like this story, although I did have to go back and reread to remember where we were ;) And I'll put money that that was Lnorian at the end of the chapter! Please don't make us wait as long for the next chapter!
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo the Ethens are on the move and they're even being helped by the unsuspecting enemy. This is still going really well and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it! Especially all the Edyane and Iadden goodness I know is still to come. I wonder if Edyane will still be annoying to Iadden and if Iadden will still antagonise Edyane. I shall wait with abated breath for the future chapters! Hope you update soon!
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello again! It has been a long time since I last reviewed and even longer since the last story. I have to say this second installment is so far really good! It's nice to see the Ethens taking some control and not being weak and demure as everyone says! I am looking forward to see what happens between Iadden and Edyane. I shall have to read the rest of the chapters soon! Maybe later tonight if i have the time... it's soooo addictive! I shall leave another review once I get to the end of the rest of the chapters. Just thought I'd leave behind a little bit of encouragement while I have some time! Keep up the brilliant work! Will write again soon!