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schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on your graduation;) And no, there will be no killing, if I do so how will you ever finish this? But perhaps some mild torture *evil laugh* But other than that I get the getting your life on track, so no worries.

Anyway, haven't read the chapter yet, I think I'm gonna go back to the start and read it in on sweep, cos there's too many details I think I'm missing and with you saying there will be more regular updates, I don't wanna miss anything.

schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is so great
person Ann
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating! You made my day a little brighter :). I haven't read the chapter yet, but I am sure I'll like it ^.^ And congratulations for your graduation :D
person Itara
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww I find it cute and funny how Midi and Lnorien wish that their mate was like the other when they are each others mate! And Eydane has a rival in his love for Iadden. I wonder if he will get green eyes! Keep up the great work! This was another fantastic chapter and the graphic scene was really good for your first time writing this. Also don't worry too much about how often you update! as long as you don't give up on this story, your readers won't give up on you! At least you know that I won't! Until the next chapter, take care!
person boring_neko19
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Long time no see. I am glad that you actually don't abandon this story. (Think that you forgot already. Sorry T.T).
That was your first graphic scene? Wow, that was great. Keep it up. It's really funny to think that Midan'niel do that without knowing L'norien true identity. (Laughing). I like L'norien but I still like Yari'niel more. I don't know why I like Yari'niel more. Maybe because he was different than L'norien. He was poor, right? but he work hard not only for himself (I guess) but also for his family. Although he isn't as reliable as L'norien in term of financial and honor but I like that part of Yari'niel. Well, I doubt Yari'niel and Midan'niel can be a couple that easy considering Yari'niel connection with Nlie'seri. I get the feeling that sooner or later he will become enemy.
The scene that catch my interest the most is the scene where Lian'niel meet Delan'niel. The way he was so surprise just seeing the change in Delan'niel is interesting. I never think that Delan'niel is arrogant. I wonder why Lian'niel think Delan'niel as arrogant? Everyone point of view is different I guess. Lian'niel knows about Ryan'ne and Delan'niel so maybe he can be a little friendly there. I don't know why but I always got that weird image that Delan'niel and Lian'niel will be so perfect together after Ryan'ne. thinking that Delanniel is the bethroted of Lian'niel's brother. Forbidden love. Lian'niel hatred make me remember Iadden hatred for Edyane once a LONG time ago.......NOOOO! It's wrong. Especially because he loves Iadden. Forget it please. T.T It's just a weird fantasy of me. About Iadden, Lian'niel will be so jealous if he know that Iadden is an ethen fated to be with Edyane. Though, the way to Iadden's love is closed for Lian'niel (Maybe?).
I really LIKE the Idea that Meanea son is Edyane son. WOW, that will definitely complicated think. I wonder that Edyane's father (the king) ever thought that (Well, he knows about Edyane little affair with Meanea right?) \m/
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh you're back with The truth of Legends, yay!!! And with such a big and hot chapter as well.
Poor Midaen’niel so tormented in his passion, I hope you'll put him out of his misery shortly, he doesn't deserve it, nor does Lnorien, who I'm loving more with each chapter. Hoping it won't take another 5 months but even if it does I'll be here to read the next chapter;P
person Itara
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay I guessed right! I can't believe Midaen’niel and the general are engaged and yet they don't even recognise each other! I think Midaen’niel should make the general suffer a bit as he's been so neglectful. I can't wait to see when Eydane finds out it was Iadden in his dreams. I think that will be fantastic! I also like the sound of Iadden's tattoo. It's going to be painful for Eydane when he has to get the tatto done if they mate. Although I'm sure he can handle it. And I wonder who is coming from the North. Could it be Midaen’niel and the General? I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. This was another great chapter and left many questions to be answered lol. Good luck with your dissertation and exams!
person boring_neko19
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yo, long time no see. :) It's a Good Chapter you know. I like it. In my opinion, I know now how much Lnorien thinks about Midan'iel. He never cares about him. I mean, He never care about his bethrothed enough to be curious about how his future one look like( I would be curious if I were Lnorien. What about if my fiancee look like a pig?). I wonder if Lnorien put Midan'iel as one of his duty as a general and an Eth??? Now, I turn to hate Lnorien. Well, I think You can't help it if it's Lnorien. I just underestimate Lnorien's cold and cool feautures. I personally think he never think that Midan'iel is important. T.T Poor Midan'iel. My heart is aching for fury. I would be angry if I were Midan'iel with my bethrothed totally doesn't care about me.
Now, about Anaihr, he's an eth and a man right? I was laughing there you know. To think that it's already the time for Edyane to has a little admirer. I guess Anaihr will make a perfect rival for Edyane or maybe...Iadden *You know Anaihr being Meanea's son. Even just a little he DOES inherite his mom little infatuation, right? (secretly hoping)* To think that Iadden think Anaihr is Edyane's son is really funny. There is no way, right? or maybe... he could afterall you WERE The author and Author rule. Looking forward for the time Edyane finally meeting his beloved Iadden and Little Anaihr. I think it would be hard for him accepting Anaihr but...oh, well...Edyane is a kind person. But I also think Edyane would still look Iadden as someone to protect like a little brother that was actually Edyane's uncle. (Iadden is Edyane's uncle, right?)
Good stories. Looking forward for the next chapter.
Good luck and success in your dissertation. I REALLY KNOW how it feel. It EVER happened to me.
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the short review I'm in a hurry!^___^´

I just adored how Lnorien and Midaen’niel dance about each other without realising who they really are. And so many old characters turning up. FINALLY!!!XD Poor Tenaii, still struggling with his feelings for Quera. And I loved Anaihr, the little imp of a matchmaker. Adorable.

Best of luck with the dissertation and the exams.
Hope to see more from you soon.
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see more interaction between Midaen'niel and Lnorien while he's pretending to be Ridaen’ne Rarin. Got to love Tenaii for persistency though he does go about wooing Quera completely the wrong way! Hope they're both in the next update.