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Its so strange to have the "dominant" be this little guy that falls asleep in the midst of a fight. I wanna see him being MACHO! and Commanding! and EXACTLY how tall is he? Same height? Inch Shorter? Three feet shorter? HOW SHORT?!

I like the tone you have in this fic. Sarcastic and funny. Just my coup of tea ;P

So. How can he meet his dominant? In a bar fight? That could be fun. Or helping his dominant up from a well someone pushed him into. Ha ha. Well, that wouldn't really give him a cool image, but I would laugh. Maybe he saw this tiny dominant and scorned him from the bottom of his heart, insults him without intending to and thus have to duel with him an then loses miserly. But, hmm, he's injured. Maybe the dominant just wanted to show him his place. Lol. Or he encounters a witch who miscasts a spell, binding him to this puny little dominant he wouldn't look twice at. And now they can't move two feet from each outer and his day just turned for the worse.

Huh? Huh? Have I helped? Can you give me an update now? :3

I think he should find his mate in the training grounds, as it is mentioned he doesn't go out much. I hope he turns out tiny but very seme!!


Loving this fic, please keep writing!

...nice story XD

Short but has potential