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I like this AND keep it up!

it was really good chapter. Rumari is so cute *hehehe* “I shall not. My mate.” “No. Mate fine.”
“O-okay. I carry mate. He is tired.” *big smile*

Aww. Dont be disheartened. I like this fic and i wanna see where it goes. Didnt know it was on fanfiction.net tho. I'll fave it!

Oh... Just when the story was getting to a good part... :D I hope you'll update soon and we'll get to read some smexin' and hopefully a baby? ^^

I like this. Keep it up.

No seriously, I do. I don't usually bother to review but in this case I have (obviously). I think your story would be improved by showing instead of telling what is going on, maybe a bit more description. But I really like the way things are going so far. I love that you're playing with the stereotype of the bigger guy always being on top, and I'm looking forward to more of the character's personalities coming out as the story continues. Especially the dominant (I can't remember his name, does he have one yet?). lol, does he know he's just been claimed as a mate? Take your time with the chapter, until you feel it's ready to be posted. I'm sorry you feel lonely. You've definitely got some fans!

Loving this story. Keep it comming.

short short chapters but really cute hehe i'd like to see more!

Wow. That ending was completely embarrassing! I hade to stop reading three times. Ha ha. What the heck happened to him? Lol. And why did the dominant fall asleep? Why did Remari talk like a baby? I'm thinking emotional overload. Laugh. The best part was when he sat behind his group, listening in.

I'm liking this story. Looking forward to the rest.

I was just roaming through and I found this charming delight! I love funny, m/m stories the best and I will definitely keep my eyes on this one.
I love his "caveman" speak at the end.

SWEET! That was f*cking Awesome! Poor bastard, one little slip up and he's in the infirmary.