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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Gives you a BIG hug*
Oh, hun, I hope everything works out for you.
Oh, hun, I hope everything works out for you.
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not disappointed at all. ^^ But awww... No hot stuff yet? ;_; Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter to see how this developes. ^^ Keep up the good work. :)
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have look at this story many times a skip over it. Now I wished I read it early. I just love it. A truly wonderful story. Is this posted somewhere else that has a alert system. That one draw back of this site no alert system.
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh. I think I get the speech now. He's a baby. Laugh. That's just so cute. At least, I think he is a baby...
And no, the ending wasn't bad. It surprised and affected me. That's something any writer would hope for :D
So, the dominant hasn't put two and two together yet, him finding his mate and all. Is he younger then our hero then? For not being able to come to that conclusion I mean.
This seems to be turning out into something really good. I so want to know the rest! :)
And no, the ending wasn't bad. It surprised and affected me. That's something any writer would hope for :D
So, the dominant hasn't put two and two together yet, him finding his mate and all. Is he younger then our hero then? For not being able to come to that conclusion I mean.
This seems to be turning out into something really good. I so want to know the rest! :)
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"“I’M WHAT! YOU TOLD ME I WASN’T FAT! HOW DARE YOU!” Manny" ...this sentence made me laugh xDDD
Anyway, the characters are slowly showing more and more personality, it shows that you have been trying hard. Just one thing: I do not think that a submissive _general_, who has been working so hard for the post, would go around saying "shit"... I'd expect him to be more polite. But that's just my opinion.
As always, I look forward to the next chapter
Anyway, the characters are slowly showing more and more personality, it shows that you have been trying hard. Just one thing: I do not think that a submissive _general_, who has been working so hard for the post, would go around saying "shit"... I'd expect him to be more polite. But that's just my opinion.
As always, I look forward to the next chapter
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I really like this story. The more chapters I read the more I like it!
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm not sure if you got my review! Stupid ReCaptcha thing...
anyway, basically, I lurve this story a lot the more I read it the better it gets :)
anyway, basically, I lurve this story a lot the more I read it the better it gets :)
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far.... Mari is a cool character.
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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far I'm diggin' it. Can't wait to see where you go with the story line.
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was very happy to see that you had liked my idea enough to choose it!
I think the dominant should prove his semeness soon; right now his sub is more seme than him! He should wake up in the next chapter and show his dragon who exactly is the one who does the protecting! :3
I think the dominant should prove his semeness soon; right now his sub is more seme than him! He should wake up in the next chapter and show his dragon who exactly is the one who does the protecting! :3