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Chapter 6 was so sad. My heart broke for Rumari. Losing his mother when he needed her so badly. I think it is a good idea to show some of his past and how he manged to become General of the Guard. I hope Yutha will be able to comfort and maybe guide Rumari's inner demon a little. I think the idea of a big strong soldier who is really an insecure child on the inside is very intriguing and cute. I am eager to read more.

I really love your story. I just came up with an idea for Rumari's mate to realize they are mates....Rumari could get hurt in front of his mate and his mate could go all demon in protecting him...then realize they are meant for each other. Anyway, keep up the great work and I hope to hear more from you soon. Oh and I'm curious as to why his mom was killed (was it for refusing to sleep with the general???) also, how she knew it was coming so that she could talk to the king.

Mmmh I hope you get over that writter's block soon. As for suggestions on how Yutha may realise,mmmh, he just has to think harder about the conversation he overheard and place it together with something the other guards will say about their general. After all he already knows he is submissive and with the strange way he reacted after the combat it shouldn't be too hard to put 2 and 2 together, right?
I may have other ideas later, but for the moment I can't think of anything...

It is quite the challenge to play seme to your commanding officer, especially when you are shorter than he is. Perhaps there is something about Rumari that brings out the macho man in Yutha. My suggestion is to build the attraction between the two by having them work together on some task or rescue or mission type thing that allows Yutha to build some sexual chemistry (or sexual interaction of some kind) with Rumari. I am sure you will be getting tons of suggestions. LOL.

Happy Birthday! ^^ And I hope that your sister and grandfather get well soon. And I hope you'll work out everything in your life. We can wait with the next chapter! :) *hugs*

this was a really good chapter...I'm really curious about the demon...what could it be? And I like the the little guy, he has spunk!

Sorry to hear you had such a crappy month. I hope this next one will be much better for you. Take your time it getting things together, we will still be here waiting for this and any other stories you care to share with us.

Happy hunting! Minds are tricky prey to catch. Hope things turn around for you.

I hope your sister and grandfather will get better soon and for the next chapter I will gladly wait so take your time.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY :) *hug*

Happy Birthday! I really love this story. It is very funny. It has a lot of potential so don't worry about pleasing anyone, just go with your heart and take a break if you need to. My only request is lots of smex. I am looking forward to this smaller dominant dragon sex so go for it when you are ready. It will be funny to see a pregnant Rumari. P.S. I don't know about your relationship with your mom but I am a mom too and no matter what has happened, there is always a desperate love somewhere underneath everything. I am sure it is the same for your mom. Best wishes on that front.