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(14) I have influence *is special* I'm just glad somebody listens to me.^^
It was so nice to see that side of Luc, you had to know that there was more to him than just the gorgeous, randy, italian :) I was thinking of what Luc said and it's funny to think that Ailill couldn't take care of himself but I suppose if Luc wasn't around he would just brood in corners and never have any fun. But they are definitely going to need Ailill, especially Oliver because if he's nervous about sex Luc might not be the best choice to sleep with (at first), he might be a little too rough or aggressive, although I'm sure for Oliver he would try to hold that back. I will say that I liked how the chapter progressed, I had been a little worried that we would have had to deal with multiple chapters of Luc helping Oliver, how they got out of the campground, went to Ailill's... you get the idea. That might have been a little too much detail instead you skipped right to the good stuff :) Now we just need someone to stop Oliver from doing something completely horrible that he can't take back, although I wouldn't mind seeing something happen to Billy ^_^
Hope all that made sense, it's hot enough here to melt my brain so coherent thought is sketchy at best but I can't wait for the next chapter ^.^

I just started reading this story and I'm up to chapter 8 right now and had to stop and say that this is just great. It's so funny and I absolutely love Oliver. I started to look at this several times and just assumed that with the prostitution bit that it would be one of those dark, heavy, dramatic stories that... well, to be honest, I tend to avoid. But it's just so cute and funny that I've been hypnotically drawn to the next chapter button again and again. Luc is just sexy as hell in that growly, dominant, but still imperfect and slightly naive kinda way. Ailill drives me insane wishing that I could just grab him and take him home to hide him under my bed. He's so hot, sexy, and upright that I just want to see him panting and mussed with Oliver riding on top of him. Of course if Luc just happened to be in the room watching then that would be even hotter! Okay, enough about that! My favorites scenes thus far would have to be when he's chasing Ailill through the charity event yelling, "I wasn't going to say no! I need you to fuck the Conti out of my ass! Lord knows that putrid man has me rotting from the inside out!" OMG I was rolling over that one. Next fave was when he was begging Ailill "Please let me be your deli meat!" Pfftt! I had no other choice but to force my husband to read that part as well and he was rofl too. Where do you come up with this stuff? You're hilarious! Okay, okay. Just gotta mention one more thing. When Oliver was masturbating while on the phone with Luc and said he was with a lumberjack who resembled Luc but he was going to name him Trent... Holy shit! I about died but then the next day when he tells Luc that his excitement the night before was from a make out session with Ailill I was like 'Ouch! That was freaking cold man! Givem hell Oliver! Yessss!' That was just too freaking awesome! So now I'm off to read more and I'll probably review. I can be annoying like that so later!

(13) It's funny even Luc thinks he needs to be coach to Oliver/Ailill but I digress because I'm not speaking to you, how could you do that to poor Oliver *sniffle* talk about throwing a plot twist at us. Although I'm not surprised that Billy wanted to get back at Oliver, I'm just surprised to what degree, that really was brutal : (
So now let me guess, it's either going to be Luc finds out and storms off after Billy or they manage to control him from making a scene. I'm all for the beating but don't think that Oliver would want that around Jose's family. I guess there's pros and cons for both unless you have a third option I haven't thought of. But I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens and the guys reactions for that matter. I'll be waiting impatiently for the next chapter :)

By the way I'm having suspicions that Ailill might be the private investigator, I don't think that you've ever said what he does, just thought I'd state that for the record ;)

GAHHH! Cliffhangerrrr :( :(

I started to read this today and i got through the whole thing, XD! I just couldn't stop reading, haha. I'm a bit of a lurker, but I review when I really get into a story! So here I am, reviewing. I love this fic, its very...unique. A prostitute that doesn't have to be! Two hot men who love him! I really hope he doesn't end up having to choose one over the other, because I really like threesome relationships! lol >_> and I like both of them a lot! haha

I wasn't expecting him to get raped like that, well I was expecting something bad to happen especially when Billy showed up at that party, not to mention something bad would eventually happen to him because of the prostitution, but I kind of expected Oliver to get away or someone to show up. Anyway, I hope the next chapter is coming soon because I wanna see some serious ass kicking! :O Please? hehe.

Geez. Damn minors, they ruin everything!
Poor Oliver, I kinda wann ahug him. Dunno if that's what he needs right now, but I'll keep the warm milk and cookies within reach. They're chocolate chip.
DAMN DAMN DAMN. =( Damn.
The other 2/3 of my favorite hypothetical 3some sure got some cleaning up to do now. And some butt kicking. >=(

As for talking, I don't know about you, but they sure talk to ME. They're like unborn children, begging to be brought into this world. =)
I'm pro-life on this one, lol.

(Is Creepily a word?)
(Um... creepy, creepily. I guess. Adverb, right? Sounds weird, but hey, I'm not a native speaker, what do I know!?)

OI, GET BACK HERE. YOU'RE NOT DONE.

Man, I gotta know what happens! Please update soon!

That was heavy. Poor Oliver, now I need an update.

Wow, I just finished reading all the chapters to date in one sitting. I'm in love, haha.
I love the dynamics between all of the characters. Especially loving the sexual tension between Oliver, Ailill, and Luc. I'm really hoping for a threesome! I have to say, I think Ailill's my favorite from the three of them. Poor guy needs to learn some communication skills though, aha.

Anyway, I can't wait for the next update!

(12) I love the bickering between Ailill and Luc, one minute they're best buddies chatting & plotting away and the next I could easily see a shoving match develop that quickly dissolves into a wrestling match, like little boys really, actually that's probably the same relationship that they had when they were boys.^^ Honestly I think they're entire relationship is based on that back and forth, one minute they're competing the next they're in cahoots (i love using that word ;) Makes me wonder if Ailill and Luc actually have any kind of a plan or if they're just winging it - maybe both, wouldn't surprise me. And then poor Oliver, he goes years with everything just fine and then all of a sudden in a very short period of time everything starts to unravel right before his eyes. It's kind of hard to feel sorry for him though since he has not just one but two gorgeous guys hitting on him and maybe it's time for him to start looking at his life and making a change. These boys are just too frustrating for words, I want to give them all a good shake, on the other hand it's making for a very fun and entertaining story :) I can't wait for the next update ^.^

Oooh, love you right back! *hugs*
Now there might have been no "action" in this chapter, but I still enjoyed it LOTS. =D The talk between Jose and Oliver? I'm SO tuned for part two and I'm not usually one for sequels. XD
And while we're on the topic of what Oliver needs, I think his two men are both right when they think he needs them. He NEEDS them both. Okay, yeah, that's just me and the potential 3some talking. Maybe what Oliver needs is to come to terms with his life. Prostitution might be fun, but he can't do it forever. But that would require a bit of growing up and that sucks. Changing well established life patterns sucks.
However, having two hot men competing for your love/a place in your bed? That definitely does not suck. I think you're working hard on that 3some and building a beautiful story while you're at it. ^_^x

~jea