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Eee, not what I expected but I loved this way even more! Lol, I hope Conti ties Oli up and drags him back home! XD

Tsk. Tsk. Tsk. Oliver. Oliver. Oliver. You silly, silly, adorable man-whore. Luc and Aillil knew that your mom was in town before you did. You should have known that one or the other of those hot, sexy men would find you there. Good! I'm glad Luc caught you! I hope they tie you up to the bed and have their naughty way with you once you feel better. It would serve you right for trying to run away from your yummy men like that. So, I take it Oliver was trying to get what's his name (I refuse to say that bastard's name after what he did! Piece of shit!) in trouble by smearing his blood all over him and then disappearing. What a wickedly, evil thing to do. Very interesting and unexpected. I hope Aillil and Luc go back and shave what's his name bald (top and bottom) and pound his nuts in until they swell up like cantaloupes and fall off! Oops got a little excited there for a minute! lol Great update and I'll be watching for the next one! Later!

my hand motions consisted of over the head, then forward in a rough aggrivated manor.

I like this story very much!! at first I thought it was a simple easy read, but i was very happy to find out it has depth to it =) it is written decently and I hope to review every chapter [ or every few depending on when i notice they came out]

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is it me or it's getting darker ? I can't wait for the next part !!!

Totally fell in love with this story after the first chapter. Oliver is a little bitchy and really is an attention whore, but you gotta love his lust for freedom and independence. Hopefully, his stubbornness won't hurt him for much longer. Ailill and Luc have their hands full with him.

BTW-> really evil cliffie.

Good grief! This took a dark turn quick, fast, and in a hurry! Poor Oliver! Not only is he ousted to Jose as a prostitute but he gets attacked the same night! What's up with Luc and Ailill BTW? At first I got the feeling that they were competing for Oliver but the further I read the more it seems like they've got something else up their sleeves. Jeez. I hope the hell Oliver doesn't pop a cap in what's his names ass cause there just ain't no going back from that! Yikes! It's also pretty obvious that Ailill is gonna figure out what the hell happened to Oliver and I half expect him to show up. It says a lot about Oliver's feelings, recognized or not, about Luc that he's willing to go commit manslaughter to keep the sexy Italian from getting himself into trouble. I'm anxious for an update now! Nice cliff-hanger BTW! How often do you update this story? Just curious because I tend to get caught up in writing and forget to check for them more often than not. Do you have a usual day that you normally post this?

O_O he is going to shoot!
how is that better than getting a lawyer?
update soon

Oh my. I sure hope Oli won't do something I will regret. I have this sinking feeling that he will. Oh Oli, come on. Don't ruin your life for a shithead like him? Can't you just have him castrated? All you have to do is train you dog right. It'll bite it right off. Wouldn't that be better yes? Yes?

I like this way just as well, especially since Oliver gets to get revenge! Well maybe, since the chapter ended before he actually shot (or whatever he planned to do) Billy. Hehe. I wonder how pissed off Luc will be, or maybe a little proud? hahaha.

Egads, don't take those guns to town, son, leave those guns at home oli....don't take those guns to town....booohooo.