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-chapter 15-
I... really don't get Oliver's mother. I just don't.
But that's okay, she called Luc and that earns her a brownie point with me. Mind you, she's still somewhat in the negative area...

-chapter 16-
"How am I supposed to turn tricks when all I can think of is what I'd rather be doing to the man I'm in love with?!"
Oh, that. That was just beautiful. *hugs Oliver*
So... is he chosing Luc over Ailill? I don't need him to be in love with both, not really. Attraction will do. And love can have many faces. Oh btw, ere I forget: no, you don't have to feed 3some, or 4somes for that matter. It's just that they get very, very lonely so they need friends and siblings to play with...!

"And the word of the day is... Slut! Let's spell it out, kids! S-L-U-T. Now try it in a song!"
...um. Okay.

S-L-U-Tee
A slut, that is he!
S.exy
L.ovable
U.npredictable
T.ease
Finding new men with ease!
S-L-U-Tee
And soon we will see
Whether the slut
Just gets fucked in the butt,
Or if his gives kisses for free!
S-L-U-Tee...

Yeah, I'm weird alright. o_Ox

"No discipline for you until you feel better."
Yes, PLEASE! XD

"Why is it so hard for you to take this seriously?"
Because taking it seriously would mean accepting all the dire consequenses he'd rather just forget and leave behind. Oh, Oliver...
"You're sick and an emotional wreck, yet you still only think about dick."
Sex is easy and familiar. Less complicated than emotions and relationships by far.

"I barely noticed the vague trembling of my hands and the panic settling into my gut, and as luck would have it, he didn't notice at all."
=( I love how you write him. You're brilliant. Please more kthxbye. =)

Oh, and um.
Bondage? Yes. Or wait, YES. Capital letters in strategic places rule.

Under Ground Hotel = love. They had it twice on yaoi_daily I think. XD

Shutting up now.

(16) I really wouldn't be surprised if Oliver purposely winds them up just so that he can sit back and watch the hot angry men, at least that's what it seems like with the whole Father Treacy thing ;) And Dillon is the perfect obnoxious brother, in that I want to punch you kind of way.^^ Now that they've got Oliver back they need to keep him there, if he just stayed put he might break that fever, they can convince him by telling him the sooner he lies down the sooner the fever goes and they can have sex ;) Okay I don't know if it's too soon for sex but it'll give them something to look forward to because I'm not sure how much fun they're having right now, Ailill just seems stressed but Luc might be having fun, he probably thrives with all this drama and fight. Looking forward to what happens next now that they're all in the same spot and (hopefully) not going anywhere for a little while.^^

Mmh hawt story! Very interesting read. I like the flow especially
I'm a noob, but what is a "john" and what is a "vanilla"? XD

Ah, the way to show that you really care value someone - call them SLUT. Boys....boys...boys. Get Oliver to a hospital. That boy ain't right in the head.

XD Oliver *is* a slut, he shouldn't deny it! Hahaha I loved the scene between him and Luc, so sweet! <3 I wuv 'em

Lol. The title to this chapter gave me some language-misunderstandings. In my language, slut means “the end”. I went like.
“What? Slut? It’s over? This is the last chapter? That can’t be? The heck with slut! Wait, this is English. Slut as in whore, deviousness and sex. Slut as in Oli. Well, that do make sense…”

Loved this chapter. Oli is as crazy as always. Lovely boy.

Oliver, you stupid @#$%^&! Can't you realize that being raped is NOT something you bounce back from? Still, it seems to me that Ailill is the better of the two to work those issues out with. Luc is hot as all get out, but his 'take no prisoners' approach might be a bit hard for Oliver to deal with just now. Is that why Luc keeps taking him back to Ailill? Because he realizes that about himself. Gotta love a character with self-awareness.

(15) What in god's name is Oliver trying to do, no seriously I can't for the life of me figure him out right now. He was just all over the board but I'm beginning to think the same of his mom, so maybe it runs in the family. To be honest I'm at a bit of a loss after this chapter I almost feel like I do after a cliffhanger but it could just be his mom that you've thrown into the mix again. She seems to want to see and be around Oliver and yet at the same time I don't think she's forgiven him or even really accepted the whole being gay thing. I don't know if that's just because of her anger just now or what but the next chapter will be interesting to see what's all said between everyone because they seriously need to talk.
Anywho not a particularly good or interesting review but I have this wait and see thing going on right now because I think what happens next will be interesting or at the very least informative. Love this chapter as much as all the rest hun, can't wait for more ^_^

I want Oliver to get the chance to start over! And I thought maybe his mother wanted to patch things up. I'm with Oliver; I hate her.
Good job again. A little short. Make it for it next time?