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(17) Okay first, no more sugar for you and second, that was definitely worth the wait, very hot! ^_^ I will admit that I was slightly worried about it being too soon for sex but to be honest it worked out, especially with Oliver's thoughts about needing to be cleansed, there was always that shadow of what happened. And of course Luc and Ailill together was just gorgeous, even the teasing and taunting between them was perfect :) I'm so glad you update quickly so we don't have to wait too long to see what happens with the three of them next, I'm thinking Oliver's freaking out for no reason and Luc just went to the bathroom but you got to love Oliver he's always good for the drama.^^ Definitely looking forward to more :)

Oh my god.
Oh. My. God.
You did it you did it you did it you did it you did it!!
I can't believe it. It's like Christmas when Santa got you that 3some you've wanted for so long only if three hot men were fucking under our Christmas tree my mom would faint and oh my god! =D
But WHY did Luc leave!? *drags him back* I have a new wish, I want some Luc/Ailill! *grabs Santa's coat tails'

You're way beyond awesome. There are no words.
♥
~Jazz

I hope Luc didn't actually leave! That asshole! lol. That sex scene was super hot, holy crap!

I'm always happy to see you've updated~ :D

Yes, mission accomplished...I guess, haha. Finally, a threesome! I've been looking forward towards potential threesome fun ever since Luc's relationship with Aillil was made known. And oh wow, home run. That was hot. It's a shame Luc had to ruin it by leaving like that. This story's great! So many twists and turns with amazing characters to top it all off. Oliver has had enough conflict to last him for the rest of his life; he needs some rest and relaxation. I look forward to the next update!

Sometimes I wonder how much Oli really hates himself. Other times I wonder if I read too much into things XD You finally gave us that threesome, and Luc bangs. Oh, wait, that has a double meaning to it... I mean, he leaves... May he feel the wrath of Oli!
Something else I'm also wondering about is what Oli really feels for All. Sometimes it feels as if the dude is just there for Oli's sexual pleasure x3 Or to tease Conti. I think All is really cute, but Luc seems to get Oli better. Hmmm.
My mother tongue is Swedish ;3

What can I say? I'm absolutely speechless. Okay, not completely. A few words come to mind here. HOT. AS. HELL. OMFG! Yummy! But where the hell did Luc go? Stupid ass. I bet he's trying to be a martyr and he's gonna try to leave Olly to Aillil to make them both happy. Maybe I'm wrong on that one (you're the only one who would know. Right?) I just pity Luc when Oliver catches up with him. Are there gonna be anymore hot 3-ways soon? Poke. Man I hope so!

One word: yummy! Ok, it probably deserves more than that, but my saliva glands are definitely in overdrive after that little scene. And I love that Oli was using his men to purify himself. Go Oli! But Luc, you better get your ass back there fast or Oli's going to hand it to you on a platter.

i just got to read everything from the beginning and i love this! this is absolutely awesome! can i make a wild guess and say that i think it's luc that oliver is actually in love with? what he had for ailill is just desire. oliver's plan to run away and leaving everyone to believe he'd been murdered is so realistic i would've done the same thing if i were in his place.

i love everything about this story. the conflict, the character development. they're all awesome!

HOMG I was laughing the entire way through this chapter. I knew Luc would catch him! I think I about died laughing when he called Olly a slut and then when Aillil did too I really did. See. I'm floating above my computer desk as we speak! lmao And then Dillon's there arguing over staying with Oliver too! snicker snicker. Oh goodness. I loved the way Aillil was giving Oliver hell and then rips Dillon's ass for calling him a twink. Then Oliver's crotch diving and teasing Aillil. It was just too perfect. I loved this comment BTW 'And the word of the day is... Slut! Let's spell it out, kids! S-L-U-T. Now try it in a song!' I need to put that on my comment for the day on my email account. Now my writer's brain is going crazy trying to actually think of a song using that word. Curse you Clover for doing that to me!!! AHHH!!! It's worse than when you get one of those horrible old songs stuck in your head for an entire day. I keep running the song L is for the way you look at me... etc. etc. through my mind and trying to make the letters work! Okay, I admit I've gone insane now so I'll leave you be but good update! Glad you liked the melon idea btw! bwahahahaha! Glad I stumbled across this because I apparently missed the release by several days! **smacks own hand and tells self to pay more attention in the future** I'll be watching for the next one and looking forward to more Oliver/Aillil/Luc action.

-Review for chapter 14- (I was out of interwebs for a while, but lo and behold, I'm back!)

First things first, I like how Oliver deals with the rape. The way he tries to rationalize it to himself and make light of it while still accepting the impact on the outside, while subconsciously the effect is so much bigger than he wants to admit. The control thing is a very good point. I think he really needs to be in control of things for a while... question is, will his two men realize that? Or will they just cut him off from sex with them and take that choice away from him, too?

Anyway, let's see some ass-kicking, Oliver deserves it! =D

(And for me it's on to the next two chapters.)
~Jazz
(no one's ever called me that, cool!)