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This is the first time I've read this story, and I just couldn't stop. Its outstanding. I hope you update soon, because I'm dying to continue reading.

Ah, right, first person. So basically Oliver would have to be tied up somehow (does Luc still have the handcuffs?) while his two men make him oh so jealous by having their own fun. XD

I liked this chapter. When Luc does revenge, he does it right. And GOD when Oliver kissed him after that, I was like WHEEE ♥. ^^x And the police guy turned out to be real line, who'd of thought. =)

As for the three men under your christmas tree: they'd be in a parcel (seperate boxes inside) and they'd come with a manual.
And for me it'd be evening, so no waking up to find men smexxing under my tree. (In Germany, you get presents on Christmas Eve.)

As always, waiting for more! ^_^x
~Jazz

(18) I remember near the beginning of this story I said something about my like or dislike of Luc was based on what he was doing at that moment and right now, not liking him so much. I also think I'm going back to the whole 'i don't think Oliver and Luc are good for each other' because seriously this is a bit much for anyone to be expected to take. Oliver already strikes me as someone who doesn't trust easily but Luc better hope he's the exception to that because if it was me this would have pretty much destroyed the trust and I wouldn't want to see him again. Even the beating while very satisfying (& best part of the chapter), you would think that any security he would feel with Luc would be gone. Of course on the other hand this could just be leading to some big making up and then Luc will point out that he still has a business and life in NY and Oliver can't stay in Hell and they should just leave and then they run away together. I get the feeling nothing is out of the realm of possibility with these two, the only thing I know for sure after this last chapter is that Luc should not be left alone and also forbidden from acting out any plan he comes up with on his own with out running it by someone first, preferably the other person involved. I wish I could figure out where you're going with this part of the story, it makes me so impatient for the next update, I need to see what they're going to do next.^^

Evening Wear is an awesome story. I have just started to read it (chapter 2) but so far it is great and funny too. Keep up the great writing.

Good bad pig! Good! **pats bad pig on head and gives him a doughnut** Poor Oli. Luc's lost his freaking mind! Mark had it coming though. Shame Luc had to scare the crap out of Oli to do it! Hope Luc does send those pictures to Mark's wife though. God knows she needs to have a heads up if her hubby is sticking it in anything that moves without wrapping it up first. Asshole! Man is Aillil gonna kill Luc when he finds out about this! Yikes!!

Luc is such an ass! LOL Though, I wonder what Mark's wife will do when she sees those pictures. I guess Luc can be an ass if he keeps doing awesome things too. :( Also, yay for bad cop!

Okay, I'm confused. lol I would still count Luc as a bad guy (That was a pretty dick move, even if it did get the guy in prison) but I'm interested to see how it turns out!

Only way Luc could have pulled that off is with Ailill at work. And too bad he had to work! Someone needs to have some sense among the three. The LEAST Luc could have done is let Oliver IN ON THE PLAN. Would that have been so hard to do? Or did Oliver storm out too early for him to do that? Like when Luc said Oliver wasn't ready to go out there? If so, Luc wasn't being quite the messed-up asshole if he was going to TELL Oliver. Still, he couldn't have lunged out of bed and grabbed Oliver before Oliver got to the door? But I feel absolutely no sympathy for Mark. Asshole deserved that and more. Hope his wife cuts off his pecker and then skins him in court! And Bad Pig did something good! So nice to see a cop stand up for the victim that way, even a victim he doesn't like.

Gushhhhh

you were giving me a heart attack! For a good 3 minutes I was thinking Luc is going to ... but then putting everything from beginning till now, I figured out that, this should be something like this! and thank God I was right! My beloved Luc couldn't be ***!!! No Way! :O

But damn! My heart was beating like hell as if I were Oliver! WOW I mean I never thought about the matter! I mean getting raped once is awful! getting raped for the second time ... unthinkable!
I don't know if it actually would have happened, what would have become of Oli! :((

Well, thank God that you love him enough not to put him go through it the second time!

The GOOD cop is not saving Oliver alone but Luc as well! :P remind me to thank him when I see him! :D

This fic never gets boring! Every time you do something out of blue and rock my mind! ^_~

Thanks and keep it up!;)

Sexy and smutty story. I love it. :) Please update soon!