rate_review Reviews

holy crap. i read this chapter and I jizzed in my pants. j/k XD

I have to say, you have a knack with writing really hot really interesting (did i say really hot???) sex scenes. yummy!!!!!

I like how Oliver can't stop himself from thinking about Ailill's manly manliness. Which is rightfully so. And I like how Oli doesn't get all weepy or guilty over fucking Ailill despite loving Luc. you've got his confliction over liking both guys down to a mellow T. which is awesome. because he can have sex with both. :D

haha. awesome. anyway, great chapter! the descriptions were super sexy.

I first like Luc. Then I kinda liked Ailill. Then I kinda liked Luc. Now I kinda like them both, so I was hoping that Oliver could love them both. And I love them getting caught by Sean. I always find it odd that so many slash fic characters are having public sex and never getting caught. Christ, I have sex in the privacy of my own dorm room and have people telling me they could hear it the next day.

have i ever told you that i'm in love with your characters and your stories? they are just so fucking magical, and not in the fantasy sense.

your writing is awesome.

OMG AILILL'S INTO BONDAGE!? =O
...oh geez, now it's out. Sorry. But really? Ooooh... which side of the hand cuffs does he like to be on...?
I really wanna hug him right now. Poor Ailill. One sided love is so HARD. =(

And Oliver's like, helplessly caught in the middle. ^^;;
(Not that there aren't GOOD ways to be caught in the middle. See 3some manual page 13.)

I am only on Chapter 8, but you have got to be the wittiest slash writer ever! I am most definately hooked. So I'll give another review when I am all caught up.

NOOOOOO!!! My sexy, cuddly, yummy, hot, studly, utterly delicious Aillil cannot be heart broken!! Especially not by Luc! You have to love Aillil, Luc! **stomps foot like a petulant child** How else are you going to end up in a three way relationship with Aillil and Oliver where the three of you can play out my favorite fantasies over an over until the end of time?!!

(19) You actually haven't said yet how Luc heard about Oliver (that i remember) and I'm wondering if it was from Ailill, they seem to have had at least some contact with each other over the years. Luc's so used to the idea that Ailill has feelings for him, that when he starts to talk about Oliver I wonder if he takes the opportunity to check him out when he comes back to town. And Luc being Luc has Oliver falling for him within days, not exactly the nicest thing to do but not out of the realm of possibilities. Don't really know how possible this is, it's really just another one of my ponderings, as I always seem to have many ;)
As for the chapter, Ailill cares about Luc and Luc uses that against him to get whatever it is that he needs or wants at any given time - drives me crazy when people do that. But it frustrates me more that Ailill keeps letting Luc take advantage even though he knows better and should just tell Luc that he's on his own. Ailill though must be sad and frustrated himself wondering if the both of them are just going to up and walk out of his life and leave him behind and he knows there's nothing he can do if that's what they decide. I think Oliver's reaction to all this next chapter is definitely what I'm looking forward to, it's just constant drama with these guys.^^

Also just saw your author notes, you're in Canada too, must be why I like you so much ^_^

I've just spent a good few hours of my night reading your story rather than sleeping to rest up for my big test tomorrow...and I have to say that it was an investment of time well spent, in fact, I luv you and want to take your characters home! (That wasn't meant to sound weird...)
Your story is one of the best, hottest, most entertaining, funny, and (in my opinion) emotional pieces of writing I have read so far! I wish I could read this for my english class rather than that dumb old Scarlet Letter! The way you write is simply amazing, to say the least, and I love how in tune you are with your characters and give them such rich personalities (I in fact LOVE Luc's crude and insulting yet loving self). The story flows brilliantly, and I've so eagerly read through, stuck on every word, just itching to see what happens, and then move on to the Next Chapter button. You've caught me hook, line, and sinker!

Also, I adore Oliver's character. I just can't find the right words to describe it, but he's so deliciously complex and sexy and crass and alluring, oh I wish I could steal him away! But I also feel for his need to have his own form of control and independence, and I think it's one of his more endearing qualities that the reader would understand, but his poor lovers just don't quite seem to get yet (not that that doesn't have it's own benefits far as serious and comical entertainment goes for Evening Wear). As I said before, I love Luc and enjoy his personality, and though it may not be so out in the open necessarily (or to Oliver at least) he is truly devoted...and I saw the Mark situation as sweet...in my love for badass characters who do what they want sort of way, though he definitely could have spared poor Oli some fright and pain. Ailill is such a sweet, kinky man, but I'm sad that he still holds his unrequited feelings for Luc. I (and I am a derranged and twisted pervert of a girl) am personally rooting for more hot threesome action...especially what with finding out just how far Ailill's kinks go (because, again, I'm messed up that way lol) and I also hope that he'll be able to get over this hurdle, and become the other bun for the Oliver Sandwich...I'm worried what new trouble will arise, though, but oh so eagerly anticipating it as well!

I hope to see the next chapter oh so soon (but of course I would never ask you to rush this lovely gem of perfection you've crafted) and I hope you don't find my drooling fanworship too creepy...I swear I'm not a Billy! Or a Mark! I swear! And I can't wait to see what befalls my precious Oliver next!

You know... I don't think I like either Luc or Ailill. I do like Oli though. Doesn't that mean Luc just played Ailill and used him? And what does it say about Ailill? Does he feel anything for Oli at all, or was all of it just confusen on Ailill's part? Jealousy? You do not say you love someone when you don't. I hate that. You don't date someone who loves you, when you don't. Where is my fryingpan? I feel like beating the both of them. Hard. In the head. And doesn't Oli feel at least a little uncomfortable about the fact that Luc almost beat someone to death? Who would have if he hadn't stopped him? Doesn't that consern him? Ahhh... Or maybe Oli is just horny... Laugh.

aw, i think i'm about to cry! poor allil (did i spell that right? lol) anyway, so allil loves luc and oliver both. oliver you can tell feels for both luc and allil. luc loves oliver but not allil, right? gah, it's so hard to get down. if that's the case then i want luc to love allil as well, then they all can be together. which brings me to another question, is there any chances for them all three to end up together in the end? i know you may not be able to answer that, but if you can, i'd be so happy! i love all the characters and seeing one of them alone in the end would be so very depressing. plus you've been building up this threesome type of relationship thing (kinda, right?), so it'll be all the more harder for it to split and only two end up together in the end. or none.

besides my obvious worrying over who ends up with whom, i just wanted to say that this story is AMAZING and i'm so glad i discovered it. oliver's character is so fun/interesting/intriguing to read of, and luc and allil as well. you've really captured the whole prostitute story and reeled it in to your own originality (i think that's the right word, i'm a little tired/boggled today). i tend to steer clear of the majority of stories dealing with prostitution, due to them being so much alike that i tend to grow bored of reading the same things over and over, but your story didn't do that for me. i gave it a chance, despite my hesitation, and ended up falling in love with it :)

anyway, i just wanted to tell you how much i liked your story, and if you can answer the question than please do so. if not, i'd understand. i'm a very impatient person (tend to not put a book down until it's finished, always) so i tend to get carried away with asking questions that cannot be answered until i read the whole thing. gah. it's hard to wait :/

on a last note, luc sounds so freaking sexy (i want him for myself!) and i kind of wish you'd show a little more of allil. i know right now i want to hug him, i feel so bad for him :(

p.s. sorry for using all lower caps, i felt too lazy to use the shift :)