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(21) Honestly the whole cousin thing wants to turn me off which is probably why I never would have seen that twist coming - now that I think about it are they cousins or are we just assuming that because he works at the bar (hmm something to ponder ;) But I think Sean's probably better than most for Ailill, at least he cares about his feelings. And of course leave it to Oliver to still try to get what he can't have, it amused me to no end that you actually used the word 'drat' in your story, not to mention 'twink taming' *snicker* It was nice to get to see that side of Sean especially since we kept hearing how Oliver describes him as mousy or meek but we got to see that he could be cunning and observant if he wants to be :) I'm also glad you didn't just have some random guy for Ailill that would have just felt a little too much like you were forcing something just so he didn't seem all sad and lonely, it’s just too bad that we aren’t going to get to see and learn more about Sean.

I can't believe that it's over already and when it comes to Luc and Oliver that was pretty much the perfect ending for them, sex and arguing ^_^ I'm going to miss reading this, actually I may miss the review responses almost as much as the story :) I'm just hoping that sometime in the future you write another story that catches my attention because I would love to read more of your stuff you've got a great sense of humour and a great writing style.^^ This story really was awesome, hope to see more soon! ^.^

What a fantastic ending to an interesting, roller-coaster of a fic. Thanks for sticking with it. I really enjoyed it & will definitely miss these characters, esp. Oli! Keep up the good work. >_<

wait! what about sean and allil?!

Luc is great. I definately pick Luc. So do we get to read a sequel about Sean now?

thanks for sharing! It was a dark ride but with light at the end of the tunnel. I love stories that end on an upnote.

Good stuffin! Haha.

Kiix

Brilliant, this was really a great read. I love the way you put together this fic, its perfectly thought-out. The characters personalities are really great too and they each make you love them no matter what they do. I mean, I love Oliver's persona and behavor even though he's a shameless slut!lol.

Seriouly, this is one of the best original fics I've come arcoss so far, Thank you for the great read I hope you update soon.

Kristal^_^

my dearest namesake clover! this is awesome. i owe you a review for the previous part as well since i seemed to have missed that. goodness, i was just away for a day and i missed an update. that's a nightmare.

anyway, this part is just so... so hot. good thing i'm not in oliver's shoes. otherwise, i'd probably be singing 'torn between two lovers' already. i know oli's in love with luc. well, i fell in love with luc as the story went. ailil was just explored thoroughly on the later parts. but my golly, now ailil seems to be determined to get oliver. merely whispering that he'd wait for him killed me. that part spoke volumes about ailil's feelings. i hope the man isn't just confused since his ex-love is part of the triangle.

i love this! so much! i think my life will be utterly boring if this story ends.

OK, I have to say, Jose is the bomb. Just gotta get that out there. Go Jose! And as long as I'm cheering, go hot, steamy, passionate guy sex with the door open! LMAO. Luv it! But it can't be so close to over! NOOOOO! I agree with pesterme2, Luc, Oli, and Ailil need to end up in the hottest, steamiest, sexiest 3-way relationship of all time. Gotta do it!

(20) You know I get what Oliver is saying about feeling like Luc isn't trying to change him but in all fairness to Ailill, Luc isn't the one who's had to watch Oliver go off with strange men over and over again and wonder if he'll be okay or even come back at all. So I don't think it's all that bad that Ailill was willing to say no to Oliver because of what he does, sometimes you try to do what you can to help and maybe Ailill didn't know what else to do. In the end I'm not surprised by Oliver choosing Luc and Ailill deciding to just let them work it out themselves, Luc was an ass (there's not leading someone on and then just being a jerk) and Oliver is clearly infatuated so you might as well let them either work it out or crash and burn. Although I'm trying to imagine them lasting in a long term relationship I'm finding it difficult to see them in a forever kind of way but who knows :)
I can't believe there's only one more chapter, I don't want it to end but at least we found out some things like how Luc knew of Oliver and who Oliver's mom got to find him. And a couple of little things, first Jose is just awesome Oliver's lucky to have found him and second could I keep Sean please he's adorable ;) The very last couple of lines were too funny^^

Can't wait to see how you're going to wrap this up ^_^

Just one more to go?? Aw... this was an amazing scene! Finally with Mr. A. :-) There's a case here about a Stanford Law School grad Cristina Warthen who ran a high-end escort service to pay her school fees in the news these days. This double life thing reminds me of it. :-)