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for Evening Wear

by PyTerato

person J42
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your wicked imagination!! ;-) Okay, now you have to spill the beans on this Ailill person. (And who are these Treacy's that they attend these charity events and still hang out in bars? Is the bartender, Sean, also a Treacy? I had to re-read it 3 times and I'm still confused.)
person reid
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yea more!
and sences that make me squrim 2 my fav :)
gald your thinking of updating weekly
thax 4 the update
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person jeazard
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I love it, love it a lot! :D And can't wait for more, please update soon! ^^x
person Anise
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(2) I kind of like that we're not quite sure who has the upper hand, I like the idea of torturing them both :) I have to admit that at the beginning I thought it might be Luc since he does hold Oliver's livelihood in his hands but it's obvious that he still wants him and he can't really force Oliver for the very reason that he stated in the story. I get the feeling we're going to see more chapters like this, each of them trying to get what they want and them fighting each other all along the way-it'll be fabulous! :) By the way this Ailill (hope i spelt that right) that you mention is he going to be playing a role later or was he just mentioned in passing. I have to say that just using the term 'lone wolf' makes me curious about him, plus if Luc turns out to be a real jerk we need a backup guy ;) Yet again I can't wait to see the confrontation the next day at work because you know something's going to happen, this may become a regular thing with these two, definitely looking forward to it ^_^
person J42
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it already! You've got a sense of humor. ;-) Quite a character indeed!
person VicHam
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If there’s one thing I love, it’s old themes with new twists. I have to admit, usually if something has prostitution in it I steer clear, because... well, right off the bat, I can’t think of one single fic to that theme that hasn’t either had me rolling my eyes or grimacing before clicking the “Back” button. Until now that is. Oliver is awesome! He’s that uke boi that’s on the bottom, because he chooses to be and you just know most tops are a little bit scared of him (which makes it so much juicier when he finally meets his match ^_^). He’s obviously sharp as a whip (I don’t play well with clueless/damsel-in-distress/I’m-just-an-utterly-passive-victim-of-circumstances-so-you-can’t-blame-me-for-being-a-total-slut types +_+). He comes across as sweet in a sardonic kind of way, which is my favourite character type in the whole word ever and from the way you describe him... TOTAL HOTNESS! (Fishnets and longish red hair... lets see, that’s about a 9.5 on my favourite-kink-o-metre ^_~). And then of course there’s the fact that he turns tricks, because he wants to, which has my little armchair-shrink-wannabe brain going into overdrive: “Why would he do that? What happened in his childhood? How does it make him feel?!” which is just my way of telling you that you’ve written a very interesting character, indeed. I’ll wait a chapter or two before ranting about Luc, but honestly, with a name like Luciano Conti, how can he be anything but fascinating? You’ve just redeemed Mondays for me, which is extra special, but no pressure. A fic this good is worth waiting for. Still, very eagerly awaiting the next instalment.
person livelifelovehgdm
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey! I thought that this story had an excellent twist! I really enjoyed reading it, and you can count me in as a new fan! It was fantastic! I can't wait for the next update!
person Shivawn
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Weekly updates sound wonderful to me! :D I love this story. Luciano (oh man, what a sexy name) sounds like SUCH a sexy man. Man, Oliver is in deep shit. Luciano seems like a possessive man. (Or I hope so...) XD I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
person Anise
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you update quickly because I can't wait to see how this meeting is going to go :) From the start the idea of Oliver doing what he does for thrills was interesting enough but then to have his new boss find out right away (and the way he found out) definitely takes it to a whole other level.
Poor Oliver, I can't help but think that his new boss would enjoy holding something like this over someone but on the other hand I don't think he would want people to find out he buys prostitutes, especially since he just started this job and the last ceo was a criminal. All this is definitely going to make for an interesting dynamic between the two, can't wait to read more ^_^
person Haber
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the writing style, plot ,characters, just everything.Hope you will update soon.