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Oooh, this was pretty, I liked it! :D Oliver was basically like "damn him for ruining my whore's night out". But I think he got appropriate recompensation. And then some.
Also, think our dear Luc might have a new job for him? Otherwise his whoring might not be so much pure fun anymore...

In other news, this time I'm not exactly late in terms of having to leave, but it's 4am and I have an exam tomorrow. Your timing sucks - but thx nonetheless. :P
I love this story I really really LOVE it. XD

Did I say "funny moments" ? it's more like HILARIOUS moments.Luciano is a real devil but who else could handle Oliver ? It's so good ! Update soon.tomorrow ? Ok, deal !! LOL Aida

Dang - this was just way too much fun! Great scene and action. :-) Loved how Luciano sprang into action. He's just positively wonderfully evil: had thought that things were heading in the right direction - but now Oliver is stuck without a job, and perhaps more dependent on his evening activities? Or perhaps the mysterious Aillil will come to the rescue and together they will spurn Luciano's advances? Oooh.

What he trying to do
A. Piss him off beyond belief
B. Make him desperate for money so he has no one else to turn to

(3) What in the world was Luc thinking taking Oliver to something like this, did he really think Oliver would behave. Luc is about to learn fairly quickly that Oliver will say or do anything and doesn't seem to worry much about what someone will think. I have a feeling he's may not like people thinking that he's on a date with a guy, strong italian that he is, doesn't fit with the image of course I could be wrong. It's going to be an interesting party and I can't wait to see more of Ailill, also I absolutely love Oliver's inner thoughts they are just hilarious :)

I am such a bitch. Here I am whining about reviews and clickies and here is a gem that I have indulged in 3x and plan on coming back to the well (you only update on mondays?)until the story is complete or heaven forbid the muse dries up. No whammies, no whammies. Any how, I love your characters. There is a delicate balance between smart ass and asshat and you have danced on that highwire very well. I love lucy too! It's great to see a seme who doesn't realize he's about to get his attitude adjusted by a spunky uke. So, keep on writing. I'll keep on reading. Deal? Deal.

Tah

Kiix

I read this chapter twice ^_^ For me, it kind of chafes when a reviewer goes “squee! I can’t wait for the next update!” after I’ve busted my ass on getting this one churned out, but well, yeah... Can’t wait for the next update! I love how much sexual tension you get worked in without being blatantly smutty *applauds* (not that there’s anything wrong with blatant smut ^_~). I said it before and I’ll say it again: I love Oliver. The scene where he went on his knees and started scrubbing, all worried about Josè losing his job... So sweet. And Luc is proving quite the enigma, indeed. Eager to see how this thing with Ailill pans out (mmm... wonder who’s responsible for Ollie’s “sensitive” posterior :P).

I usually don't read this kind of stories. I'm more into darker themes. But this one peaked my attention and once I started reading I coudn't stop. But seriously Oliver IS a manwhore +_+. Thanks for the story and pls update soon.

Awesome. I love this chapter so freaking much. I'd elaborate, but I'm running late. XD
*squeals in delight as she hurries off*

This story is just so hilarious, I kept laughing all along.And you're writting skills are just amazing.I can't wait to read more it's a pure pleasure.Aida