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for Evening Wear

by PyTerato

person tdorian
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh oh Luc wants him so badly !! Their "little dance" is so funny ! MORE Aida
person VicHam
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens... You’re doing a really good job of keeping us guessing who the “good guys” are. Ailill (what’s the origin of that name btw?) is proving quite interesting. I do like that he seems to take an interest in Ollie as something other than a fuck-toi while Luc.. gah... I have no idea whether to love or hate this guy! One moment he’s being a total bastard and the next... he’s down to being 70% bastard. I can’t tell whether he genuinely likes Oliver or if he’s just using him, which is so frustrating! (In a good way, if that makes sense). Every time I finish a chapter I start counting the days to the next one. This is some seriously good writing!
person BennyPeace
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore Ailill.
person Avernion
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. I love this story X) Oli is just sooo interesting.


I'm so putting this little pice of fiction in my RR-list ^^
person Munez
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, I love MSI, so even if this story was shit, chances are I would've wanted to marry you anyway. But, not only is this a fantastic story, but it's one of the few stories I can't wait to read more of! I'm so intrigued by Oliver that it's not funny. And as an admirer of Irish boys, I kind of want him to get that attention he wants... Something tells me it isn't quite so one-sided.

But, god, Luciano is amazing, too! I just love your characters. They're sexy, sexy, sexy. Just the kind of guys I like. I usually don't appreciate hooker stories, because the prostitute-character is always really miserable and shit... But Oliver actually enjoys fucking. And I like that. Pushy-bottoms are the best fucking thing ever. THE BEST. If only Jose knew Oliver wasn't quite so untainted... So, yeah, I'm waiting with baited breath for more. Sorry if I ranted too much, I get really mouthy when I'm in love with something!
person oni_ichi
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg i died laughing at that end. how could you leave it at that, that just plain evil
person Avernion
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love it. I need more.

I think I'm addicted.
person Anise
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(4) Is it wrong that once you put the image of Oliver topping into my mind I couldn't get it out ;)
I have this over whelming sense of blackmail looming in Oliver's future something along the lines of 'stop sleeping around and you can keep your job', really wouldn't surprise me if Luc pulled something like that. Ailill and Luc are an interesting little pair, rivalry is a funny thing it's more often love/hate than just pure hate, definitely curious about how that all fits into everything that's happening.
You have to love coatroom sex, it was a very steamy chapter, can't wait to see how this night wraps up I get the feeling anything can happen :)
person nanase08
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is funny... and hot....and well surprisingly amazing.
person reid
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
he is a cheeky bastard using Oliver's own words against him, i like him,
but i think Oliver needs to get the upperhand on Luc and soon, if he dosen't want Luc to truly become he sugardaddy then again mabey that's the plan.
thax 4 the update just what i needed on a monday.
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