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O-M-G!!! HOOOTTTTTT!!!! This update was soooo good!! And made me so freaking happy!!! I LOVED it!!

And dear lord can tell you that I LOVE Ailill!!!! He's just so crazy hot!!! That kiss.... X_________X *YUMMYYY!!!*

I can't wait for more of him! And of course Luc! *practically begs for a threesome!* LOL :D

I'll be around to read more of this! I can't wait! *hugs*

I love that past are now being revealed. I can't wait to see what Luc thinks about all this.

Well he is just oh so lovable

Wow. I noticed Ailill had a thing for Oli, but I thought he was way too proud to act on it. And here he is, kissing away. Yay XD

It makes me so sad to hear about Oliver. He seems so broken and injured, covering up with a though attitude. I just wanna give him a big squeezy hug :'( He doesn't seem to be a person who would like that though XD Maybe if I was a big, muscled lumberjack <3 He he he. To bad, to bad

More? Where's Luciano?? Hehe great story!!!

Oh maw gawd. I knew Ailill didn't hate him as much as it seemed! As for Luciano and Ailill dating, I agree with Oliver, that's quite a sexy image there. And now he's figuratively caught between them now. Wowee. I love all this plot. I wanna make out with it. And we got more of an insight into Oliver's past and how he lives... He really is quite strange. I think he's afraid of opening himself up. Well, not his legs, but emotionally. I'm so hooked on him. You've got very well-rounded characters, who are complex without being irritating... and are also sexy.

I couldn't help but be amused by the fact that there was jizz in Oliver's hair. And there still is. Maybe he should shower before he gets lumberjack loving. If it goes that far...

Well, I'm looking forward to your next update! This story rocks the socks in my box of cocks.

God I love this story to death!!!! >___<

I REALLY can't wait to read more of this! XD :D

Thanks alot for the awesome chapter!! I'm sooooooo glad he wasn't fired! ;; lol

I think I might be hating Jose a little right now.
Also, wouldn't it be really incredibly bad if anyone at the club knew that the manager was fucking the CEO, in whatever context...?
Anyway, I really like Ailill. :) It seems to frustrate him that he doesn't understand Oliver, because he wants to!

And yes, people SHOULD randomly have sex. Especially if it makes chapters easy to write for you. Like, Oliver should get back into Luc's office and do just that. He probably won't, but I'd have liked that. XD

Great story, need more! :D
~jea


PS: How about some Hibbing? No, I have no idea whatsoever what "hibbing" might be, but the caption suggests "pre Hibbing", so...

(5) I like Ailill better... I think, to be honest this is one of the few stories where I'm not entirely certain who's going to end up together usually it's obvious but here, who knows. When I think of Luc and Oliver I find it hard to imagine that they could have any kind of relationship what with Luc buying him, being his boss and of course the manipulation that's been going on between the two. None of that is very conducive to building a relationship on, sex definitely but a relationship, no. Then there's Ailill, he seems to have an interest in Oliver but it's hard to tell how far that interest goes plus there's the more obvious problem of his dislike of Oliver's 'hobby', but he seems to care, it makes me wonder what Oliver's true feelings are about him besides lust. So many directions this could go, it's turning into a story of possibilities :) Another great chapter, really loved the beginning between Ailill and Oliver, can't wait to see what could possibly happen next :)

Love it! Hope to see more of Ailill ^_^

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