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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Oh crap, I'm supposed to be the one to come up with a reasonable way to make an Oliver sandwich? Um... Lots and lots of alcohol!"
Why yes, that's the traditional approach, and I'm all for traditions! ...as long as they include smexxing, and it just so happens that most yaoiland traditions do.
I do like Paolo (because I have a thing for older men), but I find it somewhat weird that he asks Oliver for his opinion. Really, he doesn't know him at all and has every reason not to think highly of him. Also, the term "punishment" seems a little odd, like a child getting a cut on his pocket money, just one step up from a spanking (and not that I'd mind that). ^^;;
As for the scene right after that: I think we've now well established that Oliver and Luc are both assholes, nice. XD
Though let me see if I can get this straight... Oliver is definitely attracted to both Luc and Ailill, that much is easily deductable, but he seems mostly annoyed by Luc's attention while actually wanting Ailill? Or is he just frustrated that he can't have Ailill within his prostitute persona and angry that Luc wants him outside of his game in Hell? I sometimes find it difficult to GET Oliver. ^^;;
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, thx for the quick updates! ^_^x
~jea
Why yes, that's the traditional approach, and I'm all for traditions! ...as long as they include smexxing, and it just so happens that most yaoiland traditions do.
I do like Paolo (because I have a thing for older men), but I find it somewhat weird that he asks Oliver for his opinion. Really, he doesn't know him at all and has every reason not to think highly of him. Also, the term "punishment" seems a little odd, like a child getting a cut on his pocket money, just one step up from a spanking (and not that I'd mind that). ^^;;
As for the scene right after that: I think we've now well established that Oliver and Luc are both assholes, nice. XD
Though let me see if I can get this straight... Oliver is definitely attracted to both Luc and Ailill, that much is easily deductable, but he seems mostly annoyed by Luc's attention while actually wanting Ailill? Or is he just frustrated that he can't have Ailill within his prostitute persona and angry that Luc wants him outside of his game in Hell? I sometimes find it difficult to GET Oliver. ^^;;
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, thx for the quick updates! ^_^x
~jea
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jose's nonchalance killed me. Will Aillill even agree to this 'date'? So many questions, and all the answers found on the next episode of Dragon Ball Z! Or the next chapter of Evening Wear. Wherever you choose to look...
Luc is up to something... And I can't wait to see what it is. Also, it is time for me to pledge my undying love to you... and Oliver. Let's all have a Vegas wedding!
Luc is up to something... And I can't wait to see what it is. Also, it is time for me to pledge my undying love to you... and Oliver. Let's all have a Vegas wedding!
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March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! More please....enjoying the story very much.
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(7) The whole phone conversation was brilliant and the last line, who knew Luciano could be so cute ^_^
It's chapters like this that has me hedging towards Luc as the guy Oliver ends up with, he started with him he'll end up with him - maybe (can you tell i'm slightly on the fence). Or maybe Luc will run off to New York (again), course Oliver could go with him which would fit with the whole my life is over I have to go somewhere new and then Ailill would be all alone... wait that doesn't sound right at all (poor boy). I knew sleeping with the boss would come back to bite them, I think that's the biggest thing going against them at this point but they certainly make for an interesting couple and anything could happen :) And speaking of Ailill, I can't wait for Oliver to tell Luc he kissed him cus you know he will, if for no other reason than to get a rise out of him XD Now I do wish I could read your mind, there's just too many possibilities, whatever happens though it's going to be fun to watch it play out :D
It's chapters like this that has me hedging towards Luc as the guy Oliver ends up with, he started with him he'll end up with him - maybe (can you tell i'm slightly on the fence). Or maybe Luc will run off to New York (again), course Oliver could go with him which would fit with the whole my life is over I have to go somewhere new and then Ailill would be all alone... wait that doesn't sound right at all (poor boy). I knew sleeping with the boss would come back to bite them, I think that's the biggest thing going against them at this point but they certainly make for an interesting couple and anything could happen :) And speaking of Ailill, I can't wait for Oliver to tell Luc he kissed him cus you know he will, if for no other reason than to get a rise out of him XD Now I do wish I could read your mind, there's just too many possibilities, whatever happens though it's going to be fun to watch it play out :D
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My, my. I've been combing through AFF daily to find some good reading. I suppose something different while I try to wait patiently for other fiction to be updated. And this is one of the few the jackpots to bring a wry grin to my face with long bouts of muted laughs. I usually look for fiction that is complete or has several chapters to keep me occupied. Ya know, it keeps me from some of those dreadful cliff hangers.
All my ramblings aside, I am really enjoying the story. I adore Luc and Oliver. Luc's possesiveness is quite riveting. Oh and Alli, what's up with him? Does he still have feelings for Luc or does he want to possess what Luc has or does he ginuinely like/attracted to Oliver? Meh. Looking forward to more. Yes. Yes. More definitely. Ha ha!
All my ramblings aside, I am really enjoying the story. I adore Luc and Oliver. Luc's possesiveness is quite riveting. Oh and Alli, what's up with him? Does he still have feelings for Luc or does he want to possess what Luc has or does he ginuinely like/attracted to Oliver? Meh. Looking forward to more. Yes. Yes. More definitely. Ha ha!
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, pretty new chapter, and we get to meet Paolo next time! :D
I'm really looking forward to see how they resolve that issue. The only LOGIC way would be for Oliver and Luc to retain a perfectly refessional and yes that means no sex relationship, but who's want that. Yeah, screw logic.
I can't decide who of Oliver's two men I like better, so I'll just keep rooting for the sandwich option. Admittedly, threesomes in whcih two of the involved partoes hate each other's guts are somewhat, uh, complicated, but whatever. I don't need to come up with a reasonable way there, you do, because you're the author. Mwahahaha! XD
~jea
I'm really looking forward to see how they resolve that issue. The only LOGIC way would be for Oliver and Luc to retain a perfectly refessional and yes that means no sex relationship, but who's want that. Yeah, screw logic.
I can't decide who of Oliver's two men I like better, so I'll just keep rooting for the sandwich option. Admittedly, threesomes in whcih two of the involved partoes hate each other's guts are somewhat, uh, complicated, but whatever. I don't need to come up with a reasonable way there, you do, because you're the author. Mwahahaha! XD
~jea
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hottest solo flute action I have ever read! Ever! When I am having fun, time just flies. Your chapters seem so short because the are so good!
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love your story ^^. didnt Luc say that he want Oli all for himself, tsk, that's a long way to go haha. Ali struck me like a real high class man, why he went to Hell in the first place, must because of his brothers.
seem like everyone wants a threesome, hm, personally, i'm not really into 3some,4some,whatever-some and i definitely not into n-some ending :/ but i like rape gangbang :0 -> i'm a freak :)) I only read a 4some once but it's only during the story, in the end, it's only.. uh, 2some? :))
So, if you must do a 3some to feed your hungry readers, could you please spare the end? pretty please? *puppy eyes*
seem like everyone wants a threesome, hm, personally, i'm not really into 3some,4some,whatever-some and i definitely not into n-some ending :/ but i like rape gangbang :0 -> i'm a freak :)) I only read a 4some once but it's only during the story, in the end, it's only.. uh, 2some? :))
So, if you must do a 3some to feed your hungry readers, could you please spare the end? pretty please? *puppy eyes*
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That phone call was SO HOT.lol I check on the site for your updates like a read addict ! eh eh...Oliver cracks me up.Now he has worries about everyone knowing he fucks Conti ? This guy is really full of contradictions !
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If that wasn't a tease I don't know what is.