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for Evening Wear

by PyTerato

schedule June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! What a great story! I liked the ending too, and I knot endings are hard. I hope there's a sequel. BTW, your puppy is cute.
person empress11690
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome! deep,thrilling and soo very romantic,i really love this story...is there at all a way you could find it in your heart to create a second???
less reviews isnt allways a bad sign, I sometimes think its readers wanting/exspecting more.
by the way, your a great writer!!! plz think on a sequel?
person Quill
schedule December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well I for one am quite upset that I couldnt be there with you through the sporatic chapter updates and plot changes but I am estatic that your idea turned out to be an awesome story! I mean like a twelve dozen stars for those amazing characters!!! I was soooo hooked on your story I am up at this time JUST finishing it. Oliver is friggin crazy and usually I don't go for his brand but you, the terrific author you are, had me from the start :). Luc and Ali are top rated for me, in that order. (#teamLuc!!!!!) I loved Conti's "handle-your-own-shit" attitude. Ali was, to me, the perfect balance for the Oli and Luc. I am so very sad that they couldn't be a big happy threesome :(. Man oh man, to have those men for christmas...I think I'd be fine just watching them get each other off :P. Well I can dream :D. Thank you for providing me with such lascivious characters!!!!
-Quill
person Whotevar
schedule April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lovely! Totally enjoyed it :D love all the characters, love that they're not simplistic cookie-cutter steriotypes. You did a beutiful job with the narration too :) thanks for sharing ^^
person Roya7777
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Did I ever mention how much I have missed this fiction?! :( every Monday?!

I do miss Oliver and Luc! I wish you could have continued it!

Well, just wanna say I have just finished reading it once more and I did have a hell of a time!

Thank you! ;)
person jeazard
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on finishing the story! *hugs*
Never before have smut and plot been so beautifully combined. XD

// “Well… Never thought I’d be in this position again.”
As much as I’d love for him to elaborate on that, I wasn’t in the mood for chitchat.//

Well are YOU in the mood for chitchat? Because I have all the tim ein the world (lie) and I'd LOVE some elaboration. Please. I dare you. XD

Anyway, thanks for this lovely story!
~Jazz
person MC Cloverville
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i knew i saw this a few days ago, but i've been extremely busy i had no time to read. and i was so dumb i forgot to bookmark it. so now i had to dig through several pages just to find this. and OMIGOSH! i'm glad i did. luc is moving in town!!! so sorry oliver, but you are indeed stuck with the guy. or more like, his ass is stuck on his cock. lol. i smell romance in the air. and i'm excited for the next part!!!

person MC Cloverville
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok..my bad. i did not see 'THE END' at the bottom. you mean this fic is finished? done? i'm not gonna read about luc and oliver again? ever? why break my heart clover? do i have to get down on my knees and beg you to write a sequel. like PLEEEEEASSSSE.

and can you keep me on your mailing list in case you decide to write another story. please. mccloverville@gmail.com.
person mashael
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely Fabulous
person jeazard
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh geez, I'm one chapter behind, it seems. So, "Something cliché" first.
I LOVED this chapter. Everything, from Jose being awesome over "I'm in love with Luc" down to that amazing sex with Ailill. It was brilliant and lovely and I'm so happy for Oliver right now. ^_^x

Now on to the next chapter...