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for Embracing a new life

by Ele

person Elken
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is getting interesting. It's makes his behaviour a little bit easer to understand when you know the back round. I knew it even if Andreji said to River that he and Demian weren't in the intim relationsip but they were stil having sex.

Keep up with good work. I'm eager to fing out more.
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One word... LOST. So so lost. What just happened. You know I feel really and for River being treated like he is sometimes.
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An interesting chapter. Sharing more than bed, they also share espiritual power.
person annushka
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you are keeping us on the edge! I would bet on someone from the counsil, but I might be completely wrong...

Andreiji and his independance thing... well, he's doing his best I guess, you did not protray him as a commitment kind of character. It's kind of cute to see him try so hard for River's sake.

I wonder what the general direction of this story will be like... I mean, it's obviously not only about River turning into a vampire, this new character brings out some old mistery to light. We'll learn more soon hopefully!
person DW
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the idea of the "slow" turning rather than an immediate change to a vampire for River. You've got great and interesting ideas. Keep writing. I'll be here reading with every update.
person Ele
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A big hug each for annushka and DW (You're the fast reading type, eh? *twinkle*)!!
person annushka
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the lack of review lately... Life had caugh on with me.

Still love your story, and I am glad to see River more daring. It's good to see some new dynamics, and that Andreiji is also willing to go along and admit his "mistakes".

I am also very curious about this backstory... I wonder if it is about how Andreiji came to the counsil.

I am looking forward to the update as always. Keep up the awsome work!
person kiix
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A-Ha, found you. I wondered where River went. Hope you get tons of hits here at slash. I'm glad that River is returning back to the kick ass hunter he was at the beginning of the first book. I can appreciate that he had to go through some major changes with Andreji but he seemed so diminished. Give the boy a spine and let him stand on his own. I think he needs that to survive in this fantastical world you have created. The backstory you're showing for Andreji is good. Filling in the gaps.

Guten Tag

Kiix
person Ele
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know... time issue, see? The next two chapters are longer. :)

Thank you very much for reviewing!! *hugs & kisses*
person jazz
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo Andreji's past, and who knew he could see spirits, lol cool. So who's the guy chasing him? Thanks for writing! :D