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Poor Vil. I got the feeling that things would turn out badly for him He did not have it in him to pass Orel's initiation. The story is refreshingly unpredictable. I think I am getting addicted to it.

I have been reading your story on and off and I just love it so far. It is so different and the guys in the gang are so well developed. I like the way you introduce the rules of the world. It makes me think of a videogame. I can wait to catch up to the last chapters. i hope the agreement will go well though there seems to be some tension between Nikto and Lis.

Tol's recounting of his trip in Chapter 14 is absolutely hilarious. The whole story is awesome. I am wondering how come Nikto dared to take Enriki's sister to bed. He must be nuts! LOL

I finally caught up to chapter 19. I love the story so far. I wonder though if this is truly a male/male story since there hasn't really been any action between Orel and Nikto. Orel feels the attraction but it doesn't seem like Nikto will be reciprocating anytime soon.I think Orel must be really strong to not get jealous when Nikto is going off with other girls. My other suggestion is to try to put more of a hook at the beginning of chapter 1 to make it easier for readers to understand what is going on. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

... To say I'm bemused by this story would be somewhat of an understatement... Don't get me wrong, the characters are intriguing and the cultures/worlds fascinating but I have absolutely no idea where this story is heading. You say in the premise that Orel will experience many changes... I hope for the better because his character is twisted and obnoxious at best. Nikto is the real mystery, he's so cool at the exterior but something else is brewing inside... I'm very interested to see where this fic goes... Please update soon.

I like it. Very interesting characters.