rate_review Reviews

This chapter was great.  Thanks for updating the story.

Hurray!  Welcome back!  I am so happy to see that you are still writing this story :-)

I am going to read the entire thing from start to finish again.

This story is crazy. Just crazy. Like the writter is doing drugs too along with her characters.
I have NO idea what's happening or how will it end(can madness end?) but it is so amusing to read.
There is so much going on in every chapter, so many characters and yet all of them are on equal grounds( even though we read more about Orel and Nikto's sex then others)...we get to read about each one of them a bit.
I can't even picture how they look( honestly too many scars, threads and freakish stuffs)... but I'd like to see the true conspiracy(if there is one) disciveered, the war with bey finished and see Lis hooking up with someone.
I think how Nikto came to be what he is should remain a secret till the end of this story( it does have an end...but madness has no end ahahaa)

Wow, very interesting story. I love Nik. Hope to see more soon.

You've created a really interesting world here, with a fascinating cast of characters, while managing to steer clear of cliches. I really like Nikto; his personality really lures the reader in to wonder more about him, as does his past. It's also nice that you introduce your facts about the world as you go along, rather than starting off listing all kinds of things to "build the scene" while losing the reader's interest. Jumping right into the story keeps things moving while also making sure that people pay attention in order to understand what's going on.

Anyway, not bad. I kind of wish I could read the original Russian, since some things are inevitably lost in translation, but alas...I don't speak Russian. Ah well.

~Moonstar

Yay! I am so happy to see new chapters. Thanks for updating.

Thanks for the new chapters. I was just about to start searching for this story. It is one of my favorite stories on this site. I can never get enough of these crazy bastards.

Oh my God! What an insane pair. I had a good laugh when Orel and Nik appeared the morning after their big fight. Orel with ihis bad eye and Nik with his cane. Love the sex scene by the way. Orel is definitely spinning out of control. On one hand Asa got the beating that anyone of them would get if they defied Orel's orders like that, and Orel got the beating he deserved for going out of control like that. That poor girl downstairs had no idea of what she was missing out on.

These guys are crazy but I love hanging out with them. Orel is torturing himself so much about his relationship with Nikto. I hope he doesn't push Nikto away with his insecurities. Lis trying to steal Asa is just hilarious.

Thanks for the update. I really love this story.