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for Foul Play

by Blindfolded

schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oki you got me hooked thats for sure... update please!
person Illyric
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I like the transfer of POV; it certainly keeps things interesting. Nice job; I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person Shivawn
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it :) I hope you continue on cuz...as you said 'I received this well' :P Reading books for school hasn't lessened your writing...(Or at least, I think so..XD I LIKE IT!) :D Can't wait for chapter 1!
person Carmen
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! It's nice to see you're back, by the way. :)
person aki
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was really well writen and not akward at all. I love your main character he remainds me of me.
(especially the part about sucking with teen interactions XD)
I there going to be a maining list for this? I don't want to miss the next chapter if u decide to make one.
my email (skyblue_k44@yahoo.ca)
person ashley Young
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this sounds really interesting, but make sure you finish cultured spirit too! I love that story please update soon!

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