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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I almost liked the canibalistic death rather than the ovarian cancer XD. Much more exciting =P.
I like the way you're characterizing their friendship, and I'm entranced by your characters =).
Great job, and keep it up!
I like the way you're characterizing their friendship, and I'm entranced by your characters =).
Great job, and keep it up!
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(3) What great characters these two guys are, I'm really enjoying finding out about their lives and friendship. I actually ended up liking that we get a bit from both of their perspectives, it's nice to know what each of them are thinking :)
I also got to ask are you canadian because you used the word toque and I don't know anyone else who uses that term except for us, just something that jumped out :)
I'm really liking this so far and am looking forward to the upcoming chapters ^_^
I also got to ask are you canadian because you used the word toque and I don't know anyone else who uses that term except for us, just something that jumped out :)
I'm really liking this so far and am looking forward to the upcoming chapters ^_^
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww
really cute
and I do like the pov, i just wish you'd have a little bit more of Alec's.
I'm really curious as to how this is going to progress.
Also, in the first chapter, when talking about his green hair, Alec says "mom hates it"
does he get a new mom? or was that just a type-o?
really cute
and I do like the pov, i just wish you'd have a little bit more of Alec's.
I'm really curious as to how this is going to progress.
Also, in the first chapter, when talking about his green hair, Alec says "mom hates it"
does he get a new mom? or was that just a type-o?
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can't wait. i like your format!
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh thanx so much for this. I love Quin and he's so oblivious and he should just tell he knows.
But thanx a lot for updating this so fast. I love your writing and I cna't wait to read more of this
Thanx again <3
But thanx a lot for updating this so fast. I love your writing and I cna't wait to read more of this
Thanx again <3
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This seems interesting. I'm already starting to like the characters and your writing style is good to read... a sort of natural flow. POV change works well too, haven't had any problems understanding it.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've begun to weave this story together extremely well.
The PoV switch is relatively obvious, and I'm rather enjoying this story. Keep it up =)!
The PoV switch is relatively obvious, and I'm rather enjoying this story. Keep it up =)!
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squee! I want more. I wonder what Alec writes about... hmm... update soon!
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please continue!
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued so far. You should definitely write more of this. I'm already intrigued by the characters.