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identity theft. Not a great way to meet people.

Write more soon. K?

I loved this story and can't wait to read more. Please finish this story...........so many times people start a story only to never finish for some reason or other. You have a great start that captures my interest and with a great promise for this story to develop in to something huge.
So go write and update regularly and quickly!

I love this! God... you are such a great writer.. I just love your stuff haha.. more please~

I would have been at a loss for words too, it's not everyday you open your door and face down the barrel of a gun. Jack just doesn't seem to be the type to get mixed up with a loan shark, it couldn't be him at all.

Yay, can't wait to see what happens next.

This is ridiculously enjoyable. Please keep going!

Seems promising! Looking forward to ch. 2

Awwwe poor Jack! He's INNOCENT Gabe!!! How could Danny do that to his friend?? Damn that name right now... I can't freaking stand it!

A 'Danny' that lives under the same rooftop as me, stole from me 145.00 $. Just got paid back today! Arg

I know that it's not as much as the 12 000$ that ur Danny indebted Jack with but anyways... there's just no value for trust... and he lost that too! (both Danny's are fucking pricks and stupid!)

Anyways, I'll stop my ranting now. :D

I just wanted to say that I enjoyed this first chapter and I'm really wondering if Gabe will hurt Jack or not... I'm hoping for the 'not' option 'cause Jack just doesn't deserve it! Danny does! Did the little prick run away?? It sure looks like that! hugh Asshole!

Awe hell, I can't wait to read some more of this! Plz update as soon as you can! *hugs* :)

Gosh, I blamed Danny and u didn't even mention that it was him at all... But it sure does looks like it's him!

I like this story already, I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter and how is Jack going to get out this.