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for Hijacking Jack

by FoxtrotUniformCharlieKilo

person Darkmatter
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the interaction between Jack and Gabe. I hope we get to read Gabe thoughts during that scene!

Not related to this story, can someone help me tell Yaoi Cow who posted "Desperation to Find a Story!" that the story she's looking for is Perseverance by Lime and Tangerine. She has it so that only members can review/reply so I couldn't help her out. I hope I didn't offend the author by commenting on this which is not related to the story. My apologies if I did.
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How interesting! I'll be looking forward to the next chapters.
person Saminada
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! NOoooo!!!! He's being taken away!!!! Argh! I hope things wont be to bad for him... And I can't believe that Gabe didn't let him call Danny! Why didn't Jack let Gabe dialed Danny's number instead of doing it himself?? I'm pretty sure Gabe wouldn't have minded...?

Anyways, there's NO guaranty that Danny would've answer his darn phone in the fist place! And knowing the kind of guy he is, he's probably chewing on his nails in a corner somewhere and wont answer any freak'n calls he might get! LOL :) If that's the case (or something similar to that) he's a damn coward! And I hate cowards!!! grr >< I hope he pays for his terrible deed!!!! Go Jack! I hope he uses his imagination like his dear friend -Danny- did! >>

Anyways! Thanks alot for the fast update! I enjoyed it and I would certainly enjoy more! :D XD *hugs*
person Bexy31
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Yay! ^_^ This is really good so far :D Please keep up the good work, and update soon! ^_^
person kitty08
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far and am looking forward for more!!!
person dutsada
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. "accosted by a mop" i like that.. I suppose the next chapt they are on the way to LOndon.... Can't wait fro the fun to begin!
person Kahlan1986
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story for the first time and luv it! It's just too hilarious... not really... but I think Jack's so cute... and Gabe is so yummy.... and Danny is in deep you know what.... no wait... Jack really is.... Please be sure you update this great story on a regular basis. I will anxiously wait for your next update... please don't take too long! I need to find out what happens next to poor little Jack. UPDATE SOON!... PRETTY PLEASE!.. ~~ Kahlan ~~
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. I am adding it to my recommended reading list. I love Jack he is just too adorable and can't wait to see what Gabe has in store for him.
I think Danny is in big trouble and am looking forward to seeing Jack have his revenge on him once he convinces Gabe of his innocence that is. Update soon! Great writing/plot.
person kiix
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it's too good to be this short. come on. write more. write more now. now now now.

Okay?
person mcdgoddess
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jack. I hope he gets to kick Danny's ass.