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December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY. IT'S AWESOME AND I NEED TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS TO POOR JACK. THANK U.
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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really like this story and hope you continue with it. I want to find out what happens to poor Jack next.
Importantly, I also don't want to lose track of it, and forget to read it, whenever you do find the time to complete it. It's very original and well written.
Importantly, I also don't want to lose track of it, and forget to read it, whenever you do find the time to complete it. It's very original and well written.
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was looking for this story today, wondering if it has been updated since I haven't been on the site for awhile now. I wish you would update this story, it has so much potential.
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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Weapon of choice: Dirty Mop. Ha Ha! Absolutely love this story, especially the opening scene with the oven. Jack is way out of his element now. Hope you update again soon!!!!
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January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, where are you? I hope everything is alright and nothing bad has happened in your life.
If I make you some homemade fudge (any flavor you want), would you update then?
Pretty please....
It's been over a year now.....
Please update this story soon.... it has so much potential......
Where are you?...............
If I make you some homemade fudge (any flavor you want), would you update then?
Pretty please....
It's been over a year now.....
Please update this story soon.... it has so much potential......
Where are you?...............
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Where are you? Please continue this story it's been so long since you updated.
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling that it will take you a long time
to update huh?
to update huh?
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am feeding your muse back as you requested in the hopes that you update this story.
I need to find out what Gabe does to poor Jack. It's now been over two months of long and anguished waiting on my part. I hope you haven't abandoned this story and continue with it. It is too good a story to give up on and I think you will disappoint many readers if you do. I hope everything is well with you and that you return to writing soon. Take care.
I need to find out what Gabe does to poor Jack. It's now been over two months of long and anguished waiting on my part. I hope you haven't abandoned this story and continue with it. It is too good a story to give up on and I think you will disappoint many readers if you do. I hope everything is well with you and that you return to writing soon. Take care.
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I really love this story. Thanks.
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a lot of fun.
You do need to double check spelling, grammar etc and you tend to switch from past to present tense, but, hell, it's so much fun to read she doesn't care - which is saying quite a bit considering how anal she is about that kind of thing.
It's amusing, it's rather unexpected and quite racy, and it looks as if it's going to develop into something really worth reading.
Can't wait for an update.
You do need to double check spelling, grammar etc and you tend to switch from past to present tense, but, hell, it's so much fun to read she doesn't care - which is saying quite a bit considering how anal she is about that kind of thing.
It's amusing, it's rather unexpected and quite racy, and it looks as if it's going to develop into something really worth reading.
Can't wait for an update.