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Gahhhh. I just finished reading this in one go. NOOOO! *SOBS* NGL, I hated Asher for a lot of the story (but your writing was magnificent and compelling, so I continued :D) and my love for Muffin/Vincenzo was really starting to grow, but now....the ending. Man. *VOTES FOR SEQUEL*

Did u make MAHSA from Asher and Muffin's name? MAHSA spelled backward is ASHAM which ASH is from Asher and AM could be from Asher and Muffin's name. If so, you are creative. haha

hey mahsa,
have a merry christmas and a happy new year!
looking forward to that sequel, hopeful for it.

PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE SEQUEL SOON! WE ALL NEED IT!

You must write more!

I just finished reading your story. I enjoyed it tremendously and so did hundreds of others, if the reviews are anything to go by (that's a lot of feedback!). It wasn't just porn without plot; the characters were well thought out. It seems like you enjoyed writing it.

Please decide to write a sequel but only when you have free time. I love Muffin/Matthew pairing with Asher, and Vincenczo and Alrick friendship with Muffin only.

Love this story! LOL, I JUST HAD TO REVIEW YET AGAIN and profess my luv. I heart you for your talent

Hi.. Um this iz me firs tym rytin a review seriosly an wel... Im nt so gud at itLoll as u csn proly tel.. Uhh i ges waned 2 say i luuuuuuuuv ur story.. Actualy tis 1 of da best i red!! An i kinda hav a request.. Can pleazzzzzzz ryt a sequel im sooooooo dyin 2 no watz gona hapen nex an wel... I kinda uh.. Wan muffin(i mean matt) wit mario(i prefr 2 vincenzo) caus dey ddnt rely do netin "pout" .. Il even try an review.. Sumtin i totaly neva do but in ur cays il mayk an xception "eager smile" so pleazzzzz....a sequel??? An cors thanx soooooo much 4 sharin dis story... I adore alrik an hope 2 see him an mario again.. Bout asher dont no i mean i luv him an al but i want muffin wit mario an if asherz der dnt tink datz gona hapen but den again... Tis ur story an wateva u cum up wit im positiv tis gona b gud.. Oh an i toly dnt bliev u wen u say rytin iz nt rely ur tin.. No ofens 2 ne of ur oda stuf.. But ur rely talented!! K den thax again 4 sharin such a wonderful story an sory bout da crapy review lyk i said neva don it b4 by

omg! please dont stop this beautiful story! this is the only thing that makes me smile! you have such a talent, you should continue it!