rate_review Reviews

Just read all three chapters and I've fallen completely in love with this story! Can't wait to see what happens!

Wonderful beginning! Had me hooked after the very first paragraph!! I hope you are fast with the updates. How old is Muffin?? Oh, please write more.

Oh, I hate having to log in, but it's all worth it. I loooouuve this story. Even though I've seen this type of story before, I haven't read a detailed version of the homeless teenager story. It's wonderful. Even though I'm loving it I can't wait until he gets a bath. For some reason I can practically smell muffin. (and that name is sooo cute. I want to name a puppy or a neko after him) Please keep up the great updating.

A story where you can't see all the way to the end!!! (sighs in happiness). Muffin is just so darned cute! Hey, plot can be fun, and it sure is this time!

Interesting story..

cant waiting for next update

thank you for your story..^^;

another grat chapter. Muffin makes me laugh and i so wanna know what he looks like clean and what his real sge is!!!

this is a lovely story! i enjoy the pacing and characters a great deal, and i'm looking forward to what happens next! at first, in the beginning, i was a bit confused by muffin's volatile emotions, especially towards zack and his wife (?) but in the following chapters you really brought his character out even more as somewhat manic and frenetic in his actions and feelings. annd asher is positively de-lish! can't wait to see our boy muffin all cleaned up. i'm curious though--will his limp go away or is it really a physical impairment and not an act??? all around, i'd say this is a wonderful start. :D

Okay Asher did not just let the kid go. Muffin needs to learn that his goose is cooked and stop running. I hope Asher goes easy on him. Though what we have seen of Asher so far doesn't suggest much mental stability.

LOL i actually love it. cant wait for the next chapter

I really liked the interaction between Muffin and Vincenzo. It had me laughing. For someone with such a cutesy nickname, Muffin has a tart mouth on him.