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Finally he gets his bath! I love how he's so pouty and boyish when he gives in to being washed. Mmm,I can't wait to see how it all goes down >^..^<

(in all honestly, my laptop had crashed, blue screen of doom specifically, on me and my whole review got wiped out.
; ___ ; *sobs* it's okay, for you, i shall type another. )

Now I Own You? he says...
HUH? is that guy okay?
and what sort of random guy suddenly kisses (mouth to mouth) someone who obviously is already okay?
he purposely did that didnt he? XDDD
so cute~ and cliffhanger it is! thank's for the warning but..... AAAAAARRRGHHH!!! Its a GLIFFHANGER!!!
despite you very obvious warning... I still read this chapter~
because after such a long time of hunting for new reading material, I finnally stumbled upon yours~~~ ^___^
*___* yay~ whoots~ something new to look out for updates~!

and what's muffin's real name??!?!??! he never said, and ash never pressed on for it!
why's he so reluctant to give his name anyway?
and 20? muffin is 20? i thought he''d be younger!!!
and how old is ash again? 20+ ? 30-ish?
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh~~!!! and italian dude is so cute!!! reading the exchange between him and muffin is so hillarious! right from their 1st encouter to that day on the docks~ hehehehehehehe~ XDDD

and aah! AAAAAHH!!!
next chapter is what? next chapter ish whuuuuttt?!?!?!
finally, after long last, muffin is gonna get groomed? O o O gaspsssssss
but well, technically, he already had a bath ;)
he fell into the water didnt he? sooooo, he's had his bath!
thou, a proper scrub with scented soaps and shampoo's would do him better.
I wonder, will he look, like, good looking? That'll show cassandra~ XD

ONWARD wITH THE GROOMING!!! YEAAAAYY!!!

updatez~ puhleezeee~~ thanks!

- nekoii

I love it XD. It's not cliche at all and I can't wait until the next chapter.

wwwhhhhhhhhyyyy was there blood on his haaands?!?!
(oh btw, quick update! for me at least ^___^ *floats in happiness* )

I'm assuming its muffin's blood, seeing as he felt something warm on his lips, then when he touched them, there was blood on his hands... sooo. it's his blood... but... why in the world was he bleeding? did the blood from the cut on his head drip all the way down? but surely if that were the case, he would have noticed yea?

and heeeeeey... how dare he just chop his hair like thaaat.... you know, if you just cut someone's hair off while it's still in a pony tail, it will look weird!!! you need to adjust it a bit before it looks ok.
just now long is muffin's hair now?
and what does asher's hair look like, since were on the topic of hair.
muffin's is black
while asher's is.... what colour was it again?
eyes... muffin's is green
while asher is grey-ish?
well if you ask me, muffin has nicer colouring than dear asher here! but heh, well what can you say~ muffins are definately more colourful than plain ole ash eh?

which comes to the topic of.
aaaaaaarrrghhahahha!!!! asher is such a puzzle! can't he be direct with the poor boy?
but then again, muffin should just stop lieing.... what IS his real name, really....

Will we ever get to know it?!
will we ever know what's going on?!
Stay tuned to the next episode of "Muffin" to find out~!

Gah! ^___________^ UPDATEZ please~ *A*

Love the update. Thank you for this wonderful story! Muffin is so cute.

I'm addicted to this story. ^-^

Your charactors very lovely. Expecially Asher, He so cool.

WWWWOWWW! Best chapter yet! Didn't know it could get better but I was soooooo wrong! Looooove!

I figured that Asher's line of work wasn't going to be anything legal.

CPR. With tongue. Asher's a sly one isn't he. ^_~

Oh poor Muffin, what have you gotten yourself into now...

Great chapter. Hoping for more soon.

I won't say that I've never seen a story like this, but still somehow I find myself wondering what will happen next and being more interested in the plot than in the relationship between the two main characters. I hadn't expected events to unfold in the fourth chapter as they did and I was pleasantly surprised. I think the plot is interesting and the characters are being developed well. I look forward to reading the rest of your story.

I love your characters, both Muffin (cute name, by the way) and Asher (another nice name). Their rough personalities and how they interact with one another is very entertaining. This may sound silly but I can’t help but think when they are together that Muffin is the bark, while Asher is the bite. Does that make sense? Sorry if it doesn’t.

Anyway, I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen next to Muffin.
Also, I hope that Asher’s line of work is relieved in the next chapter or two. I can’t figure out if he’s a tough straight-laced business man, or some kind of crime boss. I believe that his line of work might have something to do with why he was in that part of town and why he got attacked.

There’s just so many questions I have now. This story really draws you in. I hope you up date soon. Oh, and your writing is very good. Keep it up. ^_^