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for Muffin

by kiyoai

person wynja
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I honestly don't know who cheer for... One second I was all "come on, Muffin-boy-GIVE IN allready!" (allthough that would have made a bad, short, story, so I REALLY didn't wat that, but whatever) and the next I wanted him to just punch the man in the face. Hard. Especailly at the hair-scene... touch my hair and die! -grin- Wonderful to find out more about what he looks like... black hair and green eyes sounds beautiful....
person kahlan1986
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome. Muffin is just simply adorable and I love Asher. Thanks for the fast updates. I really am enjoying it very much. I used to have a cat named Muffin (17 years) so that's why I checked out your story. It's really neat how you name each chapter after a particular muffin. Cool idea and great story. I love it. Please write more.
person Night Writer
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My friend made lemon squares today. I ate them warm.

Fuckin' amazin'!
person lakuniko
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow~~ update!!
I'm so happy^^

Thanks a lot.
person gillie
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally, Muffin got a bath! The whole geting Muffin clean was so funny! Asking for bubbles, hahaha. But, I do have to agree with Muffin, lavender stinks!! You are a super ninja bunny of fast updates!!! Thanks to another chapter of wonderfulness!!
person betseyj
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
asher is so sexy!!!
person K.Blood
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Didn't I just read a new chapter yesterday? O_O

Okay, I'm going to go on record here and say that I love you. ^_^
Thanks for the quick update.
person kitty08
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow great story! i wonder what Ashley meant by owning? and how long will he need to get Muffin to take a bath.. :P please update soon!!!
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic. Your use of imagery in all of your scenes makes it so easy to picture your characters' surroundings. Not to mention that Muffin's dialogue and internal thoughts are hilarious. I hope you keep up with this story !

person miles
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story ! I like it and your writing... And your humor, especially in chapter four !!
More please !