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wwhhhhhhhhhooooooolllllllllyyyyyyyyyyy ccccccrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaappppppppp!!!!!!!!!!!
a new chapter!!!!!!!!! wooooooooooooooooo!!! damn you write fast.

it seems that ASHER is screwed up as much as muffin is- they're perfect for one another in that aspect.
sorry for not getting his name down until now. the 'ash' part fits the color of his eyes! and the 'her' part is because his inner woman is screaming for release, but isn't getting any.

poor muffin. kept in that house against his will while his destined-to-be fucks other people in front of his face. i'm just kinda amazed at how quickly asher was able to get a replacement.

sometimes he (the rich dude) reminds me of a robot. i think i mentioned that before- wait- it was that he seemed like an alien. but yeah. robot in the way he is able to deal with pain (from the gashes he had). i think muffin realizes this somewhat inhuman side of asher. that makes the rich dude even more scarier. like he's some type of superhuman thing.

ah well. i can't wait to see what happens next! i enjoyed reading this chapter.

Poor Muffin. His attempts at escape are futile.

That's right Asher...totally fucking undone by a grungy homeless kid! HA! But I really hope Muffin has tons of love and a great happy ending...after all the stressful but much loved drama of course. And I wanna know where the HELL those scars came from! ASHER, go beat up the bastards that hurt Muffin!!!! Ok...so I much love this though it was tough at points and I'm glad Muffin got clean. He was mui dirty.

What a fun story, very interesting to read. And quick updates, thank you!

Very interesting story. I'm glad that you finally gave some hints about what Muffin appearance is like. I had been wondering what he looked like (good thing you said black hair when you did. I was beginning to picture him with a more blonde colored hair). Any way, keep up the good work etc, and thanks for the quick updates.

holy crap this story is good. on ch 2 right now. i love the way you characterized muffin, and that awkward, horribly awkward yet charmingly dangerous rich dude.

great story!

ch 3: I am soooooooooooo anticipating Muffin's makeover! even if it's against his wishes!!! hohoho....man. muffin is so snarky it's cute. i love his wit, and i love the humor in this fic. his spiel at the receptionist was so funny! muffin is a smart little dude, he is one of those characters that you know will scratch you when you try to hug it. cute!! great chapter.

ch4: wow. that's fucked up!! poor muffin. oh well. it's for his own good. heehee.

thank goodness there's another chapter to read! i can't wait to see what the rich dude means when he says he owns muffin. sorry for not remembering rich dude's name...

great chapter! again!

a bloody mouth? i am as confused as muffin seems to be.

i like the conflict you depict between these two characters. that ric guy is just so mysterious it's frustrating when he doesn't answer valid questions. i like how he seems a little likean alien though. i also like how you finaly gave us a description of what muffin looks like. damn. i feel for his character, especially that hair cutting scene. if someone took even an inch off my head i'd be screaming murder. poor guy. great chapter! i wait in anticipation for what will happen next!

Enamored. Enough said.