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Thanks for updating. This story just keeps getting better and better. I am going out to buy some muffins for breakfast on Sunday morning and hope that when I check back you will have posted another chapter. I think I might buy a green cup to drink my coffee in while I am munching on my muffins.... waiting and staring blanking at my computer stcreen... waiting... sighing...hint... hint... update... pretty please.. with a muffin on top... JK.... update when you get a chance.... I will keep checking back. Love it.

Love the action! Asher and Muffin are certainly quite interesting characters you've rustled up! Kudos - looking forward to more updates.

very excited chapter.

Can I assumed that Asher already feeling sexually toward Muffin?

Wow, Asher almost lost it in chapter 6. He has this kind of feel to his personality that makes him come off as less then human sometimes. It's not a bad thing. I think it adds to his character. Makes him more intimidating, more mysterious and dark.

Poor little Muffin almost got himself molested and is too confused at the moment to realize it. And those scars...
Was Muffin in some kind of horrible (water related) accident, or was he abused? You probably won't tell me anyway, will you. It's okay, I understand. I'll just have to read on and find out for myself.

I'm happy to hear that Alrick is alive. I hope that Vincenzo is also okay (I really enjoy the quips Muffin likes to throw at him).

I like how you always manage to mention an actual muffin in each chapter so it goes with that chapter's title.
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Wow! You have opened up the door a wee bit, and showed a bit of the real Asher. Does this mean that Asher is throwing Muffin out of the house?? With outhos dirt, stench, and raggity clothes, he will have no protection. Poor Muffin!!!

Wow great story!
These two are very stubborn, they will be perfect for each other :)
One thinks he gets always what he wants - without problems and the other shows him that´s not true....

Waiting for another great chapter...

about Muffin image...I think maybe he look like 'Riki' from 'Ainokusabi'

this is image from web.. ainokusabi.atspace.com



don't now if picture wil appear, but it it not. this is link
http://ainokusabi.atspace.com/gallery/mich22cov.jpg

Damn, you update fast! Great! Ahhh... this chapter was very hot and violent... ;o) I love the control-thing... Oh, and mentioning Monsoon? Ha! I've read the first chap of that and if was really fun... hopefully I have time for the rest this weekend.... I have to say this story was the one I choose, though, but that's just me and my very strange need for master-pet-like stories... although this really isen't... or... well... ;o)

I'm so loving this. Very interesting plot and characters. Thanks for posting.

I of course love your story. In first place because of the idea,in second cause of the style and thirdly the dynamic between the characters. I just have this one peculiar question about you and Night Writer,Muffin is always posted after Monsoon, are you guys in some kind of competition.