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I hate the FBI....I hope there asses will be kicked after such a low blow!!

I love the building sexual tension between them and the growing relationship. Your story isn’t just pointless sex without plot, it’s about two characters who met by chance and how they evolve. You’ve set up a lot of possibilities, too. Muffin is simultaneously getting closer to Alrick and Vinnie, and although Asher was introduced first Muffin has the option of ending up with any one of them. Even if he doesn’t there’s a ton of biting sarcasm and innovated insults; it’s very quick witted and fast pace, and if it were a movie I bet it’d be amazing. You haven’t stooped down to cheap tactics of instant love or insta-sex, and you keep the readers (yes, all of us ;D) hooked. Muffin is adorable, and even if he never gets laid I would be a faithful reader to the very end.

Oh, I am so happy! I just checked back and found two new chapters! I love the addition of Porto.. I have a 5 year old terrier mix... it makes the story so much more interesting....I think Muffin is in trouble again... Did Asher actually see him talking with those FBI goons?...I am so looking forward to their confrontation it should be very interesting.....By the way, I think I made some enemies on Sunday when I bought out all the muffins at the local bakery.... I tried to explain to all the angry customers that I have a bad muffin addiction but they didn't seem to understand... Now, I am in temporary hiding, waiting and sitting in front of my PC, still eating muffins and drinking coffee.... waiting.... waiting... for next chapter. I love this story so much. I hope it turns out to be an epic because I will be so sad to see it end. Thanks for giving us all such an entertaining story. ~ Kahlan ~

Love your story. I read all the way up to Chp. 8 from the beginning and your story is insightful. It has a plot that is going somewhere, the main characters are well-developed (not just sex-machines). But haha, I was wondering, what happens when you run out of muffin types to name the chapters?? The End?? Hope not..

You are not nice. I can believe you stopped there... wait, I guess I can believe because writers are evil sadistic people. Update soon please :)

I have no idea what to say to make you update this any faster, but whatever it is, please just imagine I said it.

oooooo...shivers going down my spine. asher pickshisnose, what will he do? i liked the interaction between muffin and that burned guard guy. it was funny.

GREAT chapters! they were wonderful to read.

OMG captcha. I hate this validation thingy. it's so annoying...

It was not the writing that was hard to read, mostly the story line and stress of the situations. I really like this chapter! I feel like Muffin developed so much more and we know more sides of him. I can't wait for the next installment! I wanna see the rich bastard groveling before muffin! and Muffin being all sweet and loving and taking care of him - or some such lovely scenario and though I suppose I may have to wait for those lovely dovey moments till after they work out their strange relationship. its okay, i'll wait.

Ohh! Plot twisties, yumm. Money troubles at the dinner. How did such nice people have an evil being for a son??? Aldrick being sweet AND kind. Seems like he has a thing for Muffin. Asher....well nothing about him this chapter but still thinking over his actions from previous ones. You have to be the fastest, quickest, most ninja of all with your updates. To which I give you many flowers and chocolates!

aw, no Muffin-Asher interaction in this Chapter. I hope Asher comes and take Muffin back soon! Thanks again for the wonderful chapter.