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Oh gosh, I'm excited. This is getting GOOD.

Write moar. D<
I was sitting here today, after I foolishly broke my favorite glass, and here I get a new chapter. :3 YAY. You motivated me to actually make an account here...meh. Well! Good story, I liek..now write more before I'm forced to bring out the whip. ._.

I am not officially addicted to your story...I feel so bad for Muffin sometimes when Asher is such a prick to him :D I cant wait to learn about Muffin's past*his real name, his scars, etc.*
I can't wait for more from you, your story is amazing :D
Jades

I mean I AM officially addicted to your story!! SO sorry, I am a bad typer :D

Thanks for the quick updates... and vivid descriptions that bring out Muffin's personality. Thanks so much for bringing Asher back again.

This story is SO good ! I can't wait for the next chapter !

I love this story! You have me absolutely hooked! Muffin's fiesty personality is perfect, and I love the interaction between the characters. But now the FBI are in the equation, that is certainly a twist I didn't expect. You certainly know how to keep your readers on their toes!
Love it! Keep up the great work,and update soon please!!!

Guess what I'm eating right now for breakfast?
Banana Chocolate chip muffins. Mmm. ^_^

I love when this happens: the day before, I read a new chapter, then when I get back on the next day, hey, look! Another new one! Thanks for that. You've made my morning.

"“No, I just feel bad insulting an invalid.”" lol. Good one. I enjoyed that whole scene between Vincenzo and Muffin. Especially that brief little bonding moment they had.

Freakin' FBI. Leave them alone! I don't like bacon with my muffins. :P

i thought you said "the smut is on the way"
don't stretch it to far.
please tell me that he isn't just a regular mobster.
actually that's fine as long we don't find out he's a vampire/damphire/werewolf/elf/witch/hermaphrodite etc.
that would kind of destroy this whole homeless guy thing.
anyway i don't believe i've read a slash story with a homeless guy-main character before.
so this story was such a joy to read.
i wonder what's muffin's story.
about this whole mobster thing.
and of course if i may request muffin's name- it wont be something like billy/blue/kim dong wong/jaelyn/mohammed, right?
i mean it's gonna sound real?
like something someone would name their child in real life without smoking weed?
i've got to ask.

Hmmm... I'm not sure my review worked... do you have to fill those letters in now? *sigh* Good thing I copied it:
I got two chapters to read at once, what a treat! THe scene when noone at first recognizes him at the coffee-shop was so sad! You really made that heart-felt! As for the next chapter, wow! Things are getting dangerous, aren't they? *hugs pillow*