rate_review Reviews

As usual, another great update. It was rather sad though with the valiant Porto getting killed. I didn't see that one coming. Poor Muffin. I cried right along with him. I forgive you though because you made up for it with the shower scene which by the way was fantastic. This story is truly amazing and I look forward to reading more of it. Please post another one soon.

Ok, I have officially NEVER reviewed a story before, in five years worth of fic reading, but this story is too great to pass up! I'm addicted to Muffin. Seriously, it makes my entire day to look here and find an update. Thank you for updating so much! This and Monsoon are now my two fav stories. ^__^ Just a thought, though, since Muffin is a street kid and has prolly never brushed his teeth in his life, wouldn't it taste bad to kiss him? 0_0 Lol, just a thought. ^^

Guh, I keep trying to guess whats going to happen before it happens, it's driving me crazy! The suspense is killing me, but I must be a masochist, because I love it! Please keep up the awsome writing, it fuels my dreams! ^_____________^

~MM

Yay. They're back together again! I still can't believe his dog died though. It's so sad....
The muffin PJ is absolutely adorable! Thanks again for yet another wonderful chapter. I was wondering when we get to find out how old muffin really is? I'm guessing 18 :)

No, it can't be true! I can't believe that Porto is dead... I can totally relate to Muffin, because I cried so much when my doggie died. =(
By the way, I really like how the relationship between Asher and Muffin is developing, and I like the incorporation of actual muffins in each chapter. I think the most admirable is that you incorporate a plot; most stories I've read involving adult situations are just smutfests (not saying that they're not fun, but sometimes I wish for something with a little more substance). Please continue writing and updating soon!

I forgot to fill the"captcha" things so my last review won't show, I guess. I was just saying that I literally LOVE YOU for writing this fic and sharing it and, icing on the cake, updating it so fast. This story is great, plot, characters, names, emotions, everything, great, and THANK YOUUUU!

Yeah. :D

Yay, I love this story! Just found it yesterday and I couldn't stop reading. XDD It's too addictive!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMOMG! I HATE YOU AND LOVE YOU FOR THIS CHAPTER! Poor Porto! How could you?! ::wails:: But on the other hand...Asher and Muffin in the shower... ... ...::wails for a whole different reason:: haha I'm so glad you updated so fast! I really am in love with your story! And now that I finally remembered, I'm adding it to my Recommended Reading!

::glomps:: I really, really love you and this story. I love how we are inside Muffin's head and get to know what he's thinking and yet, don't know him pretty much AT ALL. His past and stuff, how he became homeless. I just LOVE your writing style. ::purrs:: I also love how Asher is such a gentle giant and yet so socially awkward. :D It makes him seem so much more relateable to me.

Omg Just finished reading chapter 6! YES YES YES I LOVE YOU! XD WOO Monsoon lol Liza's probably one of those wanna-be lesbians. :P

Oh my gosh. I can't believe Muffin hasn't jumped Asher's bones yet. He sounds like such a hotty! :D I LOVE YOUR STORY! ...I will be honest (because I hate liars)...I wasn't going to read your story. I saw it and was like "Muffin, wow, that's weird but not my type" and went on to reading Night Writers 'Monsoon.' When she so highly complimented your stories I thought 'hmm, I'm going to check Muffin out' and GODDAMN I'm so happy I did. :D I FUCKING LOVE IT! If you have email updates, please email me when you update next? I can't wait for the next chapter. When is it gonna get dirrrrty? :P

i just wanted to write that your story is so captivating and thrilling!xD can't wait to see more of the relationship between asher and muffin!and i want to know more about muffin's past~!D: !thank you for the update!!PLS POST SOON!<333