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June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to say that this has been a great fic and I sat through it and wow! Plot wise it was great, full of suspense and lots of action. I just have one gripe, why is Muffin such an idiot? I just got so angry at him for all the things he does to Asher and all the nonsense and selfishness that he does just because he doesn't know what he's doing. I keep reading and hoping the next chapter changes him or something like he actually grows up through the course of the story, but he doesn't! So I really really hope that in the sequel, which I shall jump over to as soon as this is done, lets him grow up and mature a bit.
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June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*gasps* nooo it cant be........... thats the end....... wow i seriously loved this story. Muffin was just so rowdy ya know..... But Asher, seriously Muffin fucked him over....... What about Asher!!!!! a sequel would be quite nice ya know.....:)
I like the angry italian alot chu know.... but i think Muffin shoulda gave Liza a piece of her mind.....
I like Alrick's character alot....
I like the angry italian alot chu know.... but i think Muffin shoulda gave Liza a piece of her mind.....
I like Alrick's character alot....
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May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gawl...erm no. Gall.
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May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
and I tried to retch it away...erm no.
and I tried to wrench it away.
and I tried to wrench it away.
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May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This my third or fourth time reading this and I absolutely love it <3 im also reading the sequal and I cant wait till that updates again I just cant get enough of Muffin ^^
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March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I just finished reading this fic, and I am so glad that I got to read the completed story all in one go. Waiting for the updates would have driven me NUTS. I loved the story, I loved the characters, and I love the way you write. I'm off to read the sequel now - just hope when Asher catches up with Matthew, there's punishment involved, preferably in the form of spanking!! Just hope waiting for the updates won't drive me insane...
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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful. One of the best original fic I've ever read.
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March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello.
It's been such a long time since I last read a slash fiction with so much excitement, curiosity, eagerness...all those emotions jumbled together that make you boil and yearn for more and more and never to end, that I almost forgot how disturbingly good it felt to be kept on the edge by an amazing story. I love angst. I love angst in slash. I LOVE angst in slash when the outcome proves to be ten times worth all the cliffhangers. And your writing fed me the perfect meal~ delicious! :3
Muffin's pulled me in so deep that I dreaded every moment I had to unglue my eyes from the story. I just finished reading this vol. and moved on to Matthew. I'm so glad you didn't stop here with his "running" and I can't wait to see what's going to happen now that he's started a new chapter of his life (I hope Asher's really close on his heels, yet not close enough...if that makes any sense XD)
Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us. I'll be keeping my eyes on your updates once I'm up to date with Matthew; I hope you don't mind my following you on twitter. (I'm @fanflake)
It's been such a long time since I last read a slash fiction with so much excitement, curiosity, eagerness...all those emotions jumbled together that make you boil and yearn for more and more and never to end, that I almost forgot how disturbingly good it felt to be kept on the edge by an amazing story. I love angst. I love angst in slash. I LOVE angst in slash when the outcome proves to be ten times worth all the cliffhangers. And your writing fed me the perfect meal~ delicious! :3
Muffin's pulled me in so deep that I dreaded every moment I had to unglue my eyes from the story. I just finished reading this vol. and moved on to Matthew. I'm so glad you didn't stop here with his "running" and I can't wait to see what's going to happen now that he's started a new chapter of his life (I hope Asher's really close on his heels, yet not close enough...if that makes any sense XD)
Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us. I'll be keeping my eyes on your updates once I'm up to date with Matthew; I hope you don't mind my following you on twitter. (I'm @fanflake)
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say: I LOVE YOU. DEEPLY I DO.
I mean this was just an amazing story. I really like Muffin/Matt he is such a great character and Asher is too. Jesus the look on my face when he finds out the truth. I wanted to strangle the irony! All the characters are amazing, bad and good. And you do write wonderfully, despite your nag for porn teeheee XD! i loved this story very much and I WILL look forward to reading another one if you continue.
Best of luck.
-RT
I mean this was just an amazing story. I really like Muffin/Matt he is such a great character and Asher is too. Jesus the look on my face when he finds out the truth. I wanted to strangle the irony! All the characters are amazing, bad and good. And you do write wonderfully, despite your nag for porn teeheee XD! i loved this story very much and I WILL look forward to reading another one if you continue.
Best of luck.
-RT
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February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness incarnate :D I loved reading this, thanks for sharing your writing! And I disagree, I think you could make it as a published writer, so when you scrounge the courage to do so go for it! I would buy your books in a heart beat <3 that being said, I'm looking forward to reading an agnsty sequel to Muffin ^_^ keep writing, for thou art love.