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At the mention of his slain god, Porto, I looked over at my two dogs and tried my best not to cry. Again. I mean this in the best possible way: Kill humans, not animals (in the story).
Thanks for updating! This really is a great read!

I don't know..I might require large amounts of MOAR...hmmm..
Muffin should just totally claw Asher's eyes out.
Reeks of brilliant idea. :U
>_>
Thanks for moar.

I am very disappointed you haven't updated... I hope everything is ok with you.... and story is not being discontinued or anything... that would make me very sad... I guess I got spoiled by how quick you were updating before.... ** sighs ** well I guess I will just have to wait.... and wait... and wait... hoping for another chapter but trying not to get my hopes dashed. I was hooked and hope you will write more soon. I love your story and writing. I really loved Muffin. Take care and maybe you will eventually get back to writing more Muffin sometime in the near future.

Wow! What a great story. Muffin really had a smart ass attitude and I love it! He just wants his freedom of choice. Although, I do want to know more about the mysterious Asher. Keep up the great work!

O my goodness... you need to do more. *yum*

Some people might think, What the heck is there to be so worked up about a mutt's death? But I completely understand. I gave my husky some extra petting after reading chapter 9.

Your story is good. :) I admit, not to the point of being seriously addictive, but at least the anticipation for the next chapter is driving me restless. I also like the fact that the grammar, punctuation, and the way you present your story is pleasant to the eyes. :P I'm not a native speaker, but I know enough so that poorly constructed fic will irritate my eyes, which seem to happen quite a lot lately.

Keep up the good work. I'm really looking forward to what happens next. XD

P.S: Your frequent update is an extra plus~

*crawls to you with the haggard look of a crack addict whore*

please...i need my fix...

dude that toally inspires me to write something about a dude who whores himself to an author (male of course) for updates about his favorite story!

lol

nah just dropping by to say happy chinese new year!!!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!! fast! fast! *takes a deep forgotten breath*
i last checked... i think a week ago?
and now we have bran, raisin and cranberry!
are you going to name all the possible flavours? hehehe that'd be nice to see ^_^

hey... hey hey!
what is that 'drip drip that keeps going on? muffin sure thinks in an odd way~!
*drip drip* so strange~ hehe, its like each thought that sinks into his brain comes in the form of a drip, a droplet of water?

cute~ and ah! he has a doggie! a pet! i wonder how asher will take too that~

oh well... onwards to the hospital! next chappie here i come!

Side note: Next chapter is going to be very interesting. ;]

ah!!!! it's 3 am here!!!

by the time i finnish read ing the chapter....... gah!

*rushes off to the next chap*

o____________o *GASPS*

oh my god? muffin is such a virgin he... he... i dont know, he act's like he is a kid that just found out that his little thing down there can do more than help him pee!!!
MUFFIN!!!!!? just how old ARE you huh?!?!? 15? 16? 17?
DEFINATELY, NOT 20!!!

goodness, and with alrick callling him 'cute'... he's definately on the lower end on the scale of 10 to 20~!!!
what 14? no way. too young. 15... maybe not... my guess goes to 17.

but WHAZZAAAH! the dog appears and get's killed so fast! poor doggie only gets like a 2 chapter appearance! and he's dead!

and I'm gonna be dead if i dont wrap up this review quickly, sorry, i wish i could elaborate, but... its 4am here!!!

anyway, MUFFIN!!! he's definately very young at heart, for being so crushed coz his doggie died.
and like HELLOOO MUFFFIN!!! you just freaking had a hand job done for you while being finger (one finger only, but still!) into you and all you are worrying about is your dog! again!?
like doesnt all that kissing and probably cumming the 1st time in your whole life have ANY significance???

GOODNESS!! porto must have meant ALOT to him...
and does asher have like a whole arsenal of clothes in his house that fit's muffin to the T?
its a mystery again and again. just who is this asher eh?
just what has muffing gotten himself into eh?
how are anna and zack gonna be eh?

and HAH! that bit earlier about cassandra! whoots! i knew that woman wouldnt know what hit her. gah! she didnt even recognize him!!! called him "sir" dangit! wowie!

okay.. wow indeed....
well now...
asher's intentions on muffin are crystal clear...
and muffin on the other hand... doesnt even realise what had happened...

*face. palm* *head. wall*

gah.

thank you dear...
and now i shall await your update~
what's it gonna be next? banana muffin?

XDDDDDD

- nekoii