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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha I would totally be thrilled to die of a Muffin induced overdose XP~~~
I love working with muffins...because I can eat them XDDD I eat them a lot. Omfg they're so good :3
Keep updating!!! Love the story <3 <3
I love working with muffins...because I can eat them XDDD I eat them a lot. Omfg they're so good :3
Keep updating!!! Love the story <3 <3
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh man I'm so caught up in this story!!! I love the dynamics between Asher and muffin. Their personalities clash so much but I think they need each other! Asher/muffin 4 EVA!!!! LOL
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey hey hey mahsa!
and update! Thank you! ^_^
I had read this after reading monsoon~ because... alphabetical order my dear.
XD that's one lame excuse, i have no excuse really~ XD
but anyway, dang! when i say LEMON MUFFIN.... hehehehhe =D well you can guess what i was thinking. ^_^ lemons are afterall codeword for you-know-what
~
but given said circumstances, i guess that would not be possible so soon in the story yea?
muffin muffin~ jeez, makes me want to eat muffins. =x=
maybe i'll bake some... *A*
but ah... just who is this asher pickett eh. shall i go google him like what muffin's doing now. but whoa! hold up...
Muffin, can use the computer... like heeeeeeeyy.... just how intelligent is this little dessert? he can use the computer which 1) means he can read 2) means he can write 3) means he has intelligence to a certain level.
coz you know, computers are rather complicated if you believe it or not.
i mean heck, my grandma doesnt know how to turn it on! sorry. switch it on. *pours bleach into the gutter* goodness, its a mess in there *looks into the gutter and pours more bleach*
and.... i dunno... URGH?
how can asher KISS him?????? i never stopped to think about it. but yea! he's definately never brushed his theeth since just recently...
which made me realise. when you were writing about that part... correct me if im wrong, but i interpreted it as muffin running to his room, and immediately putting toothpaste on the dry toothbrush and brushing his mouth. theeth.
i dunno about you, but for me, i tend to wash the toothbrush and my mouth before adding the toothpaste and brushing... yea... ^___^""
anyway... is alrick divorced? it .. seems like it.
that's a small matter anyway, unless he dies or smthing.
and hey!
i know what haunts muffin.
his parents and him (siblings? yes no? dont know) went for a drive, and they drove into a lake or smthing and only muffin survived.
yea that has to be it. i'm placing my bet on this. *moves the pile of chips*
hehe~ =D
but... if muffin is still having nightmares. and behaving, well, like a child...
what IS his age really? 17?
and. (gah my bladder) sorry back to topic.
yes.
your chapter *points finger accusingly* is shorter than night writer's !!!
I thought you were her(his? eh her right?) teacher or smthing. as in you are the better writer that buggs or drives her to write her story's. ne?
then how come monsoon feels like a longer read as compared to muffin, for the latest chapter. haaaaaaaarr??? EXPLAIN YOURSELF!!!! *is decked by a brick*
sorry. =X hehehehe, dont take it to heart, i was just being mad ^_^
but. hmph. yea. muffin being there is a problem.
what now? how many more will die?
will muffin pick up his socks and do something useful and earn his worth?
what's to happen? what tragedy will befall them next?
ash . ASHER (*head wall* saying ash, alone, makes me think of pokemon. gah)
muffin. (what IS his real name goodness. it had BETTER be something cooler than muffin. but hehe, muffin is a cute pet name. ;) )
anyway. lemon muffin is this. what shall be the next, how' bout AAAAHH MOSQUITOE! *smacks it*. sorry.
how about CHOCOLATE FUDGE???? drools. yum..... ok i need a snack.
i'll catch ya again in the next chapter yea? ^_^
cya!
- nekoii
and update! Thank you! ^_^
I had read this after reading monsoon~ because... alphabetical order my dear.
XD that's one lame excuse, i have no excuse really~ XD
but anyway, dang! when i say LEMON MUFFIN.... hehehehhe =D well you can guess what i was thinking. ^_^ lemons are afterall codeword for you-know-what
~
but given said circumstances, i guess that would not be possible so soon in the story yea?
muffin muffin~ jeez, makes me want to eat muffins. =x=
maybe i'll bake some... *A*
but ah... just who is this asher pickett eh. shall i go google him like what muffin's doing now. but whoa! hold up...
Muffin, can use the computer... like heeeeeeeyy.... just how intelligent is this little dessert? he can use the computer which 1) means he can read 2) means he can write 3) means he has intelligence to a certain level.
coz you know, computers are rather complicated if you believe it or not.
i mean heck, my grandma doesnt know how to turn it on! sorry. switch it on. *pours bleach into the gutter* goodness, its a mess in there *looks into the gutter and pours more bleach*
and.... i dunno... URGH?
how can asher KISS him?????? i never stopped to think about it. but yea! he's definately never brushed his theeth since just recently...
which made me realise. when you were writing about that part... correct me if im wrong, but i interpreted it as muffin running to his room, and immediately putting toothpaste on the dry toothbrush and brushing his mouth. theeth.
i dunno about you, but for me, i tend to wash the toothbrush and my mouth before adding the toothpaste and brushing... yea... ^___^""
anyway... is alrick divorced? it .. seems like it.
that's a small matter anyway, unless he dies or smthing.
and hey!
i know what haunts muffin.
his parents and him (siblings? yes no? dont know) went for a drive, and they drove into a lake or smthing and only muffin survived.
yea that has to be it. i'm placing my bet on this. *moves the pile of chips*
hehe~ =D
but... if muffin is still having nightmares. and behaving, well, like a child...
what IS his age really? 17?
and. (gah my bladder) sorry back to topic.
yes.
your chapter *points finger accusingly* is shorter than night writer's !!!
I thought you were her(his? eh her right?) teacher or smthing. as in you are the better writer that buggs or drives her to write her story's. ne?
then how come monsoon feels like a longer read as compared to muffin, for the latest chapter. haaaaaaaarr??? EXPLAIN YOURSELF!!!! *is decked by a brick*
sorry. =X hehehehe, dont take it to heart, i was just being mad ^_^
but. hmph. yea. muffin being there is a problem.
what now? how many more will die?
will muffin pick up his socks and do something useful and earn his worth?
what's to happen? what tragedy will befall them next?
ash . ASHER (*head wall* saying ash, alone, makes me think of pokemon. gah)
muffin. (what IS his real name goodness. it had BETTER be something cooler than muffin. but hehe, muffin is a cute pet name. ;) )
anyway. lemon muffin is this. what shall be the next, how' bout AAAAHH MOSQUITOE! *smacks it*. sorry.
how about CHOCOLATE FUDGE???? drools. yum..... ok i need a snack.
i'll catch ya again in the next chapter yea? ^_^
cya!
- nekoii
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oho, the power of Google! Yay, fanart! So cute! Now you need a picture of Asher, Alrik, and also a picture of Muffin when he's clean! XD I loved this chapter, mostly for the kiss! 8P I'm happy Muffin didn't get his head shaved, I was afraid of that happening as soon as Alrik suggested a haircut. XD
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes you´re right! ....of course you are the writer ;)
This chapter makes me think (even more than before) that Muffin is a wild street cat and Asher tries to tame him....and he´s succeeding!
He´s starting to behave (he doesn´t want to but he does)....and his behaviour with the fireplace like I said a cat :)
This chapter makes me think (even more than before) that Muffin is a wild street cat and Asher tries to tame him....and he´s succeeding!
He´s starting to behave (he doesn´t want to but he does)....and his behaviour with the fireplace like I said a cat :)
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it's okay :) I like this chapter so far, It's really making me more interested in Muffin, I wonder if he really does have a real name and what will come up under Asher's name. I can't wait to read more! Your doing great keep up the good work! hehe :D
=Teania
=Teania
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm so happy you took my comment about the toothbrush into consideration! As soon as Muffin found the toothbrush, I started laughing. And better yet, it lead to smut!!! ^______________^ <3 Keep up the good work, I love Muffin's wit, his internal dialouges, and his steamy non- con molestations at the hands of Asher. Rawr. Thanks for updating!
Love love love,
~MM
Love love love,
~MM
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...you made me squeee!!. I'm so glad all my stalking payed off this morning. I took the time and read it twice so now I get to ponder the situation until next time.
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are evil, but the last two chapters made up for it. Loved them :)
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter :) I wanna know what Asher Pickett is about too! I like that he's cleaned up but i kinda like him mussy too ;) and I feel Michael could be a problem in the future. He seems very antagonistic.