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You are TOO FRIGGIN FUNNY!!! I laughed out loud during these parts:

"I got over 32, 981,002 results."

"Oh god, did he *like* me?"

"I didn’t try to take water under my wing and make it a better person—okay so maybe that was a bad metaphor..."

OMG the paragraph where Muffin realizes Porto isn't there, the way you described that feeling of nothing being there when you expect something to be there, it was really well described! I loved it!!!

Oh man i have tears in my eyes (scene where muffin gets pummeled).

LOL @ his erection. How will you take care of it, Muffin oh Muffin?? Will he do it by himself, or will he require some help? I like how someone scribbled in 'cute' into his diagram. the idea that he even attempted to make a diagram was cute in itself!

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. This story is like treasure to me!!! great relationship/couple, interesting mysteries to solve, characters to both hate and love and feel other Things for.......

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Yet more amazing plot, and a glimpse into Asher's room! Too bad for Muffin he's there on such uncomfortable terms. I love how resolute Muffin is that he is not physically at attractive. It's very convincing. Can't wait to find out what the history is between Michael and Asher. Do I sense some jealousy of Muffin? In any case new chapters never fail to brighten my day, even if they do make me want to buy baked goods and break my diet, haha.

THat's just goes to show... books and research is dangerous! *glances around at my large bookcases* I'm in SO much trouble!
I loved how you very sneakily got descripions and ages in there! I kinda thought Muffin was younger, and Ash was older, but I guess it's the way he acts... oh the innocense! It was just so wonderful!
I'm just astonished that you can find the time to write these long chapters! And, very, VERY greatful, naturally..!
A more human side of Ash was a bit scary... he needs to keep his cool, 'casue Muffin just... can't... *grin* he reacts all over the place... love him... OH! I must be VERY dense but NOW I get the "don't like water" thing, and I guess that's a big part of the filth-thing? Can't wait for next week!

Muffin's got to stop getting: manhandled, beaten up, blow up, almost drowned, almost screwed, almost killed, slapped, kicked, punched, and start getting: manhandled, beaten off, blown, banged, boned, boinked, poked, schtupped, shagged, bred, ummm, I mean fed!!!

Love all the mystery! The cops, the shootings, Asher.
You blew me away last chapter or so when Porto bit the big one.
I cried!!!!! (Six tissues!!) Great pathos when Muffin reaches down for his pooch that won't ever be there again, and just kinds of gives up!!!! Wow!

Thanks,
R

On a purely random note:

"I grumbled all the way back to table and when I sat down to pick up where I started I noticed a new word that wasn’t there before. Someone that enjoyed curling their Cs had drawn a line from the ‘me’ subheading to a new bubble that read ‘Cute’. My blood boiled."

So...is someone following him? Someone not related to the FBI or Asher's men?? And they think he's [deliciously] cute????? Does Asher have competition? *drools*

OK. Maybe I overanalyzed that part, but damn I love fantasizing about the possibilities. Run to your sugar daddy Muffin, or someone's going to eat you up...

mwahahaha...

Hahah, hey I have the same birthday as Asher. :P
Very well written story!
Thank you for writting it! XD

Loved it! Thanks for sharing it. I love how you weave muffins into the story. :-) And of course I love the Muffin-Asher action. I love how Asher cares for him. I wonder if Asher had intended for him to be left in the streets - or if he was going to pick him up, if he were his responsibility. And the Batman angle is definitely intriguing.

Ok...I'm waiting for Muffin to have a down right screaming fit directed straight at Asher. I personally would be seething by now at being used as a punching bag by not just the cops but Asher's guys. I LOVED it!! I am so curious as to Asher's reaction when he finds out his own men are smacking Muffin around. I'm gonna go sit and wait for the next installment.

Hehe, I think this has to be one of my favorite chapters so far! lmao Muffin needs to find a mirror, because he obviously doesn't know he's cute! :P

Yay, moar Muffin! ^^ I walked into my friend's room the other day, and she had poppyseed muffins on her desk. I blushed. How am I supposed to explain to my friends why I now blush every time I see muffins? 0_0 lol, The predetor/ prey that Asher and Muffin have going on is very hot, and I love Muffin's wit. Keep up the good work! ;)

~MM