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*starts reviewing immediately. pardon random and mess-ness XD *

hey hey this part "There was also a mysterious band-aid on the inside of my left arm that I ignored because the skin below didn’t hurt."
is this an injury gained from the bashing up with michael, or was it an injection perhaps?

AH!
"She also moved something I hadn’t noticed before, an IV with an empty bag that she stuffed into a closet. Who was that for?" haha, it was in an injection, or more like IV eh?

btw, the style I review, its writing-down-what-ever-as-i-read. so that should explain the randomness XD

and GAH three days! no wonder he needed the IV. what was it? a hydration or electrolyte drip?

and hey! muffin watched MAtrix? like wow! just when exactly did he start becoming homeless eh?

this story really follows muffin, its...
i dunno, contrasting coz i read monsoon too, and that follows august, the seme. while this follows the uke.
so while reading, the the uke gets distracted by, uhm hormones, i get distracted too (NOT by hormones okay, by the storyflow) so like when muffin goes "what was the question" i think, huh? there was a question? what was it?

hehe lolz~
but hey! anyway, at least muffin's deductive skills are working well. he KNOWS that asher is SEDUCING him. and he is being seduced. lol. eeehehehhehehehhehehehehheheh *grin's madly*

and GAHAHA!@?!?! who. WHO? is alex??!?!? (yay i used italics. and bolds. i would have used them more often but its bothersome to type the codes. =X sorry, pardon my laziness. hehe. XP
Only explanation i can give is that asher told jenny that muffin's name is alex. since muffin would be well, hehe, weird ne?
lol..... Alex.... blaaaaaaah that name does not do muffin justice!!!
btw, what is his REAL name? I'm really curious now.... i wonder what it'll be~~~
you and night seem to have a knack for naming characters, the names you pick always seem to fit very nicely yet still have their own unique touch for freedom (as in their names dont bind them to the name's meaning or smthing).

cool going! well

Thank you for the update Mahsa~ ^_^
I shall go check if monsoon is updated now so i can go read it ^_^
oh and the past two chapter updates, i've been reading monsoon 1st, then muffin. but for this update i've read muffin~ yay ~
but. which every is read 1st does not matter. if possible i wanna read both the same time! hehehhe ok im ranting...

blah! cya in the next update!

^____^ hehehehheheheee~~~~

- nekoii

I'm a professional lurker ya know, I didnt intend on giving up my career ya know, but, ah, here I am, cant help but commenting your cute story. I dont really like muffin but our Muffin? I sure want a bite xP. I miss Vincenzo and wonder how Asher will deal with Micheal, update plz?
P/s:aw, your fanarts're so cute, they make me want to draw again.

so...hm...i liked this chapter! Um...I'm really busy - supposed to be writing a Movie Review - so that's all! Good job ;)

i never ever, everrrr review, im too lazy, but i wanted to tell you that i love love love, thats THREE loves, your story and Night Writer's story!

can't wait to read more!!!!

I demand u marry me. Q_Q Please.
omg this is fabulus blah i love ur writing so much. I hope we find out what he does to michael. I liked jeny
Sorry my review is go bland is 4 am and I'm out of it
<3

OMG, I'm honored that you used my blushing muffins as the chapter title!! ^0^ Thank you for such speedy updates, they make stressful college life easier! ^___^

~MM

I love Muffin.......of course your story too XD

I'm starting to love Mondays......This chapter made me go Whut???

It was confusing and interesting at the same time. I will say even though I like some smut, for me it's all about plot and character growth which this story definitely has. Can't wait to see what's in store for Micheal HA!!

Finally a new chapter!!! :D
I was so happy to see this update. I've been checking everyday for it. XD
But did you have to let it end this way? It gets more and more exciting and
there are still so many questions and no answers. -_-
Poor Muffin gets tortured all the time and he is SO cute when he gets confused.
I can't wait for your next chapters or other stories.
You totally captured me with your story. ;-)

Wow, another great chapter! I check everyday hoping for an update, and when I do find one It pretty much brightens my day. Muffin's in for it now, Asher is so not gonna let him go! I'm curious as to what Asher is going to do about Michael though. Love it, and I can't wait for another chapter.

Ps. I happen to be addicted to blueberry muffins, not too sure about poppyseed muffins though.